# A 1st try **URL:** \ **Category:** design\ **Created:** [December 22, 2002, 12:26pm UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/a-1st-try/10004 "2002-12-22T12:26:14Z")\ **Posts on this page:** 9\ **Page:** 1
**Author:** ![ollihimself](https://avatars.discourse-cdn.com/v4/letter/o/eada6e/32.png) [@ollihimself](https://forum.kirupa.com/u/ollihimself)\ **Post date:** [December 22, 2002, 12:26pm UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/a-1st-try/10004/1 "2002-12-22T12:26:14Z")
Hi volks… any opinion about this ?!? It´s my first try of a (almost) complete flash page. Not for publishing… just to try out, where my personal limits are… [http://www.oliver-schulte.de/holler](http://www.oliver-schulte.de/holler) ---
**Author:** ![system](https://canada1.discourse-cdn.com/flex011/uploads/kirupa/original/3X/6/2/621e5c11736f46532526e61be85940af4230f3e5.png) [@system](https://forum.kirupa.com/u/system)\ **Post date:** [December 23, 2002, 2:09am UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/a-1st-try/10004/2 "2002-12-23T02:09:33Z")
i looked twice and my computor crashed twice… while doing it… so i wont look again i dont think its ure site though… from what i saw (the loading screen) its nice but needs some small adjustments… id change the loading font to something alot smaller probable an 8 and have it as verdana font. id also place this under the image. but thats it… the rest of it looks fine. the images is really cool starpromo\* ---
**Author:** ![system](https://canada1.discourse-cdn.com/flex011/uploads/kirupa/original/3X/6/2/621e5c11736f46532526e61be85940af4230f3e5.png) [@system](https://forum.kirupa.com/u/system)\ **Post date:** [December 23, 2002, 2:12am UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/a-1st-try/10004/3 "2002-12-23T02:12:57Z")
If possible, up the frame rate… It is extremely slow and tedious on my comp… from what I saw, nice design… Rev ![](http://www.aulman.com/rev.gif) ---
**Author:** ![system](https://canada1.discourse-cdn.com/flex011/uploads/kirupa/original/3X/6/2/621e5c11736f46532526e61be85940af4230f3e5.png) [@system](https://forum.kirupa.com/u/system)\ **Post date:** [December 23, 2002, 3:20am UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/a-1st-try/10004/4 "2002-12-23T03:20:06Z")
Yes, upping the FPS rate would help. Also, since you have it scale to fit, on my 800x600 the text is ultra tiny. Barely readable, I had to squint. Cool layout though. ---
**Author:** ![system](https://canada1.discourse-cdn.com/flex011/uploads/kirupa/original/3X/6/2/621e5c11736f46532526e61be85940af4230f3e5.png) [@system](https://forum.kirupa.com/u/system)\ **Post date:** [December 23, 2002, 9:23am UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/a-1st-try/10004/5 "2002-12-23T09:23:48Z")
hi! thx for the advice… yes, fonts are to small viewing it at 800 x 600 i suppose the framrate to be ok. I really wonder why its sometimes slow on machines that use the netscape. IE should be ok… ---
**Author:** ![system](https://canada1.discourse-cdn.com/flex011/uploads/kirupa/original/3X/6/2/621e5c11736f46532526e61be85940af4230f3e5.png) [@system](https://forum.kirupa.com/u/system)\ **Post date:** [December 23, 2002, 9:39am UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/a-1st-try/10004/6 "2002-12-23T09:39:29Z")
Strange. The site is also going very slow on my pc… That’s not very normal. But on the other hand, I like the design. Very nice… Looks very cool. 🙂 :cool: ---
**Author:** ![system](https://canada1.discourse-cdn.com/flex011/uploads/kirupa/original/3X/6/2/621e5c11736f46532526e61be85940af4230f3e5.png) [@system](https://forum.kirupa.com/u/system)\ **Post date:** [December 29, 2002, 11:47pm UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/a-1st-try/10004/7 "2002-12-29T23:47:34Z")
Yeah, the text was illegible on my comp (1024x768), and the page moved very slow, especially when I was just leafing thru the “Willkommen” section. Information flow is very important, and simple text needs to be very accessible! design is fantastic!! overall, great job!! 🙂 ---
**Author:** ![system](https://canada1.discourse-cdn.com/flex011/uploads/kirupa/original/3X/6/2/621e5c11736f46532526e61be85940af4230f3e5.png) [@system](https://forum.kirupa.com/u/system)\ **Post date:** [December 30, 2002, 2:08am UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/a-1st-try/10004/8 "2002-12-30T02:08:36Z")
its actually pretty good, but i’d say it would be better if you could click the button text too instead of the little tiny circle besides it. The text is also tiny… its fuzzy and small, which is actually impossible to read. very original though, i like it=) cheers :A+: ![](http://www.flashdevils.com/~ahmed/hmed.gif) ---
**Author:** ![system](https://canada1.discourse-cdn.com/flex011/uploads/kirupa/original/3X/6/2/621e5c11736f46532526e61be85940af4230f3e5.png) [@system](https://forum.kirupa.com/u/system)\ **Post date:** [December 30, 2002, 5:07am UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/a-1st-try/10004/9 "2002-12-30T05:07:57Z")
hi there … thx for looking at it… @ Phil… sorry iam not ollie brind…