# A freelance site would like for critics

**URL:** https://forum.kirupa.com/t/a-freelance-site-would-like-for-critics/256236
**Category:** design
**Created:** [April 1, 2008, 4:49am UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/a-freelance-site-would-like-for-critics/256236 "2008-04-01T04:49:01Z")
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### Author: ![simongcc](https://avatars.discourse-cdn.com/v4/letter/s/43a26b/32.png) [@simongcc](https://forum.kirupa.com/u/simongcc)
#### Post date: [April 1, 2008, 4:49am UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/a-freelance-site-would-like-for-critics/256236/1 "2008-04-01T04:49:01Z")

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Let me introduce my background so all of you can make critics specifically to my weakness or abilities. Thanks!

Background  
I learn Flash, html, css all on my own by web tutorials, reference manuals. I don’t have any formal programming or university training. And I am currently studying a diplomas course in Fine Arts to build up the artistic ability.

Problem  
I found myself doing flash or any web page very slow.(Not effective)  
eg. Flash: I always have trouble in thinking the structure and always think too complex of interlink. For instance, you may see a freelance project of mine.:sigh: [http://simongcc.winterhost.org/testCris/test.html](http://simongcc.winterhost.org/testCris/test.html)  
descrition: it is a introduction page of a product - a doggy doll.  
Because of copyright reason, I replace the content with some dummies. Sorry for inconvenience.  
Since the site is far from complete, please free feel to give opinion.

And I am willing to share the source to anyone willing to help.  
[http://simongcc.winterhost.org/testCris/criticsVersion.zip](http://simongcc.winterhost.org/testCris/criticsVersion.zip)  
(in order to download,  
please copy&paste the link instead using the link direct)

In short, I would like to know:

1. How to work effectively
2. What problem in my scripts
3. What logic or thought can be simplified?

I really appreciate and look forward for your help.

Thanks!!:cap:
