# A little art piece i made in flash **URL:** \ **Category:** Uncategorized\ **Created:** [April 14, 2006, 6:06am UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/a-little-art-piece-i-made-in-flash/185555 "2006-04-14T06:06:14Z")\ **Posts on this page:** 19\ **Page:** 1
**Author:** ![Hideout](https://avatars.discourse-cdn.com/v4/letter/h/8797f3/32.png) [@Hideout](https://forum.kirupa.com/u/Hideout)\ **Post date:** [April 14, 2006, 6:06am UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/a-little-art-piece-i-made-in-flash/185555/1 "2006-04-14T06:06:14Z")
i am still working on this piece. Please comments, suggestions, insults are welcome. ---
**Author:** ![applejelly](https://avatars.discourse-cdn.com/v4/letter/a/db5fbb/32.png) [@applejelly](https://forum.kirupa.com/u/applejelly)\ **Post date:** [April 14, 2006, 6:09am UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/a-little-art-piece-i-made-in-flash/185555/2 "2006-04-14T06:09:13Z")
I can’t see it :S ---
**Author:** ![Hideout](https://avatars.discourse-cdn.com/v4/letter/h/8797f3/32.png) [@Hideout](https://forum.kirupa.com/u/Hideout)\ **Post date:** [April 14, 2006, 6:12am UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/a-little-art-piece-i-made-in-flash/185555/3 "2006-04-14T06:12:29Z")
[http://beautifultorture.com/art/mind.swf](http://beautifultorture.com/art/mind.swf) ---
**Author:** ![Hideout](https://avatars.discourse-cdn.com/v4/letter/h/8797f3/32.png) [@Hideout](https://forum.kirupa.com/u/Hideout)\ **Post date:** [April 14, 2006, 6:13am UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/a-little-art-piece-i-made-in-flash/185555/4 "2006-04-14T06:13:05Z")
sorry i forgot the link. my bad guys. lol ---
**Author:** ![applejelly](https://avatars.discourse-cdn.com/v4/letter/a/db5fbb/32.png) [@applejelly](https://forum.kirupa.com/u/applejelly)\ **Post date:** [April 14, 2006, 6:33am UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/a-little-art-piece-i-made-in-flash/185555/5 "2006-04-14T06:33:33Z")
no worries 😛 Is the art meant to be the preloader? because if it is, its very nice 🙂 maybe make it gradually change colours? if the thing it was loading was the art, then you need to compress it better. Many people (like me, Im watching my bandwith, I almost topped my limit last month) can’t wait for that to load ☹ ---
**Author:** ![3d\_Nirvana](https://avatars.discourse-cdn.com/v4/letter/3/a88e4f/32.png) [@3d\_Nirvana](https://forum.kirupa.com/u/3d_Nirvana)\ **Post date:** [April 14, 2006, 6:43am UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/a-little-art-piece-i-made-in-flash/185555/6 "2006-04-14T06:43:34Z")
the preloader was very nice… it took wayyyyyy to long though. The actual piece was ok I guess, I like how it kept to the beat… but you didn’t change the thing enough, I was almost ready to exit while I watched like dots spin around the same picture for like 30seconds (but I didn’t cuz I wanted to critique it :)) I think it would be a lot better if it was a little more complex and faster paced… but otherwise good job :thumb: ---
**Author:** ![Hideout](https://avatars.discourse-cdn.com/v4/letter/h/8797f3/32.png) [@Hideout](https://forum.kirupa.com/u/Hideout)\ **Post date:** [April 14, 2006, 6:52am UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/a-little-art-piece-i-made-in-flash/185555/7 "2006-04-14T06:52:31Z")
thanks. yeah the compression needs work hardcore. Just wanted to get a general crtique. But yeah i surly want to spice it up some more. I guess when i think about it. It is really just a slide show. ---
**Author:** ![anon1712571](https://avatars.discourse-cdn.com/v4/letter/a/9dc877/32.png) [@anon1712571](https://forum.kirupa.com/u/anon1712571)\ **Post date:** [April 14, 2006, 6:57am UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/a-little-art-piece-i-made-in-flash/185555/8 "2006-04-14T06:57:30Z")
WOO i dont get it O.o hehe ---
**Author:** ![theflash](https://yyz1.discourse-cdn.com/flex011/user_avatar/forum.kirupa.com/theflash/32/1221_2.png) [@theflash](https://forum.kirupa.com/u/theflash)\ **Post date:** [April 14, 2006, 8:11am UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/a-little-art-piece-i-made-in-flash/185555/9 "2006-04-14T08:11:37Z")
I closed the browser I did not see anything … ---
**Author:** ![evildrummer](https://yyz1.discourse-cdn.com/flex011/user_avatar/forum.kirupa.com/evildrummer/32/2308_2.png) [@evildrummer](https://forum.kirupa.com/u/evildrummer)\ **Post date:** [April 14, 2006, 9:13am UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/a-little-art-piece-i-made-in-flash/185555/10 "2006-04-14T09:13:24Z")
I had to wait for ages to see it, but it was pretty good but you should either use less fractals or make the quality on the fractal images better! ---
**Author:** ![hybrid101](https://avatars.discourse-cdn.com/v4/letter/h/7993a0/32.png) [@hybrid101](https://forum.kirupa.com/u/hybrid101)\ **Post date:** [April 14, 2006, 9:21am UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/a-little-art-piece-i-made-in-flash/185555/11 "2006-04-14T09:21:37Z")
if you don’t see anything, maybe try right clicking it and save target as ---
**Author:** ![theflash](https://yyz1.discourse-cdn.com/flex011/user_avatar/forum.kirupa.com/theflash/32/1221_2.png) [@theflash](https://forum.kirupa.com/u/theflash)\ **Post date:** [April 14, 2006, 2:17pm UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/a-little-art-piece-i-made-in-flash/185555/12 "2006-04-14T14:17:46Z")
aha… it’s not huge… it’s enourmous size for flash 12MB 🙂 downloading it… will post you my views when done Surely looks you did a good amount or work… From your title of the file I am guessing that the title is related with mind… Some of the transitions were ok needed some work… Some images I did not understand in relation to your title… Otherwise nice work… it is slow though… I will say rather than adding more to it, rework some of the issues… best wishes ---
**Author:** ![Darlo](https://avatars.discourse-cdn.com/v4/letter/d/db5fbb/32.png) [@Darlo](https://forum.kirupa.com/u/Darlo)\ **Post date:** [April 14, 2006, 3:13pm UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/a-little-art-piece-i-made-in-flash/185555/13 "2006-04-14T15:13:22Z")
Very nice although it takes abes to preload, also where can i send the £2 bill for exceeding my bandwidth limit for the day due to downloading your art? (please warn people that the file is huge!) 😃 ---
**Author:** ![thesparky007](https://avatars.discourse-cdn.com/v4/letter/t/dc4da7/32.png) [@thesparky007](https://forum.kirupa.com/u/thesparky007)\ **Post date:** [April 14, 2006, 4:53pm UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/a-little-art-piece-i-made-in-flash/185555/14 "2006-04-14T16:53:42Z")
you have a lot of patience man! ---
**Author:** ![DDD](https://avatars.discourse-cdn.com/v4/letter/d/9fc348/32.png) [@DDD](https://forum.kirupa.com/u/DDD)\ **Post date:** [April 14, 2006, 5:12pm UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/a-little-art-piece-i-made-in-flash/185555/15 "2006-04-14T17:12:34Z")
I dont get it…I felt like it was some kind of brainwash, subliminal message thing telling me to go buy a big mac from mc donalds. what is the purpose of this? ---
**Author:** ![Slim\_Hazard](https://avatars.discourse-cdn.com/v4/letter/s/9fc29f/32.png) [@Slim\_Hazard](https://forum.kirupa.com/u/Slim_Hazard)\ **Post date:** [April 14, 2006, 5:29pm UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/a-little-art-piece-i-made-in-flash/185555/16 "2006-04-14T17:29:48Z")
It’s a wicked beat to animate to, and your timing & style really suits it. I would never have waited that long to watch it though unless it were on here. I don’t think you should spend a lot of time tweeking this piece, I say leave it and take what you’ve learnt and start something new. Some elements of it were ace, you should take those on and make something better. ---
**Author:** ![ApixDesigns](https://avatars.discourse-cdn.com/v4/letter/a/a88e57/32.png) [@ApixDesigns](https://forum.kirupa.com/u/ApixDesigns)\ **Post date:** [April 14, 2006, 6:16pm UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/a-little-art-piece-i-made-in-flash/185555/17 "2006-04-14T18:16:00Z")
i feel like im on acid or something hehehe. cool work. it kinda seems like its a showreel of your porftolio. ---
**Author:** ![SelectionTool](https://avatars.discourse-cdn.com/v4/letter/s/ac8455/32.png) [@SelectionTool](https://forum.kirupa.com/u/SelectionTool)\ **Post date:** [April 14, 2006, 6:19pm UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/a-little-art-piece-i-made-in-flash/185555/18 "2006-04-14T18:19:25Z")
file too large bruv ---
**Author:** ![guinness](https://avatars.discourse-cdn.com/v4/letter/g/e495f1/32.png) [@guinness](https://forum.kirupa.com/u/guinness)\ **Post date:** [April 15, 2006, 3:26am UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/a-little-art-piece-i-made-in-flash/185555/19 "2006-04-15T03:26:38Z")
don’t like it, the pieces are unrefined and difficult to make out, esp on the fractals. Color choice is a bit odd as well looks like 100% c m y k