# A new song i made please take a listen

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**Created:** [May 30, 2005, 3:06am UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/a-new-song-i-made-please-take-a-listen/149503 "2005-05-30T03:06:08Z")\
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**Author:** ![guitarplayer08](https://avatars.discourse-cdn.com/v4/letter/g/4bbf92/32.png) [@guitarplayer08](https://forum.kirupa.com/u/guitarplayer08)\
**Post date:** [May 30, 2005, 3:06am UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/a-new-song-i-made-please-take-a-listen/149503/1 "2005-05-30T03:06:08Z")

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> **[The Alkeme Signature](http://www.soundclick.com/bands/default.cfm?bandID=325591)**
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> There was once an old man. This Old man was in charge of taking care of the town in the bamboo mountains. Days were well and the towns people were happy of his duties. One day The Old man said to the emporer, I am getting too old, and I cannot tak..

First one there called “ **Shoreline Dreams** ”

Too much treble? and is the vocal need to be louder?

Please comment. Thanks