# A new thing for critiques: "Pass on mass"

**URL:** https://forum.kirupa.com/t/a-new-thing-for-critiques-pass-on-mass/169801
**Category:** design
**Created:** [November 19, 2005, 5:38pm UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/a-new-thing-for-critiques-pass-on-mass/169801 "2005-11-19T17:38:54Z")
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### Author: ![e\_sarbak](https://avatars.discourse-cdn.com/v4/letter/e/eb9ed0/32.png) [@e\_sarbak](https://forum.kirupa.com/u/e_sarbak)
#### Post date: [November 19, 2005, 5:38pm UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/a-new-thing-for-critiques-pass-on-mass/169801/1 "2005-11-19T17:38:54Z")

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I need you comments to improve it

Here is the link to my new art piece:  
[http://www.deviantart.com/view/25417255/](http://www.deviantart.com/view/25417255/)

To my galery:  
[http://e-sarbak.deviantart.com](http://e-sarbak.deviantart.com)

Thanks…🙂