# Advanced Critique wanted!

**URL:** <https://forum.kirupa.com/t/advanced-critique-wanted/202078>\
**Category:** design\
**Created:** [September 27, 2006, 3:25pm UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/advanced-critique-wanted/202078 "2006-09-27T15:25:27Z")\
**Posts on this page:** 1\
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**Author:** ![Olli](https://avatars.discourse-cdn.com/v4/letter/o/919ad9/32.png) [@Olli](https://forum.kirupa.com/u/Olli)\
**Post date:** [September 27, 2006, 3:25pm UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/advanced-critique-wanted/202078/1 "2006-09-27T15:25:27Z")

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Hello to you all!  
I just joined this forum and I’ve been watching it for a while now…  
I noticed that some are able to give real good constructive critique…  
My site:  
[http://olli.ilmari.damex.fi/](http://olli.ilmari.damex.fi/)

(I’m going to change the fonts a litlle lighter because some may have troble reading it…especially LCDs  
And change so that the music doesn’t start automaticly)  
Thank you