# Advice/critique needed

**URL:** https://forum.kirupa.com/t/advice-critique-needed/266091
**Category:** design
**Created:** [July 16, 2008, 6:20am UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/advice-critique-needed/266091 "2008-07-16T06:20:59Z")
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### Author: ![nige1980](https://avatars.discourse-cdn.com/v4/letter/n/8dc957/32.png) [@nige1980](https://forum.kirupa.com/u/nige1980)
#### Post date: [July 16, 2008, 6:20am UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/advice-critique-needed/266091/1 "2008-07-16T06:20:59Z")

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A friend has asked me to design a site for his company which designs steel frames for buildings. Brief was a simple design using white, black and grey. Was wondering if anyone could make some suggestions on how to improve what I have so far? Still very much a WIP but some early stage critique would be appreciated.

[http://www.bandits-rugby.co.uk/testarea/](http://www.bandits-rugby.co.uk/testarea/)