# Advice,Feedback,Criticisms? **URL:** \ **Category:** design\ **Created:** [April 8, 2003, 11:09pm UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/advice-feedback-criticisms/17756 "2003-04-08T23:09:59Z")\ **Posts on this page:** 3\ **Page:** 1
**Author:** ![Erik1](https://avatars.discourse-cdn.com/v4/letter/e/8e8cbc/32.png) [@Erik1](https://forum.kirupa.com/u/Erik1)\ **Post date:** [April 8, 2003, 11:09pm UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/advice-feedback-criticisms/17756/1 "2003-04-08T23:09:59Z")
I have only been working with Flash for about three months, so I know this is not as clean and professional as most sites I view. But I am going for a more organic feel, not so futuristic, star-trek like. The site is far from completed, but I want know what fellow flashers think of it. Thank you. [http://www.erikmoore.com](http://www.erikmoore.com) ---
**Author:** ![system](https://canada1.discourse-cdn.com/flex011/uploads/kirupa/original/3X/6/2/621e5c11736f46532526e61be85940af4230f3e5.png) [@system](https://forum.kirupa.com/u/system)\ **Post date:** [April 9, 2003, 4:22am UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/advice-feedback-criticisms/17756/2 "2003-04-09T04:22:15Z")
Interesting; I like the splash page and the overall feel of your website. You might want to clarify your buttons - I didn’t know that there were any buttons until I started moving my mouse all over the place. But it’s really good for three months of flashing. 😉 ---
**Author:** ![system](https://canada1.discourse-cdn.com/flex011/uploads/kirupa/original/3X/6/2/621e5c11736f46532526e61be85940af4230f3e5.png) [@system](https://forum.kirupa.com/u/system)\ **Post date:** [April 9, 2003, 11:15am UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/advice-feedback-criticisms/17756/3 "2003-04-09T11:15:09Z")
It’s a nice start, but it lacks professionalism which is understandable since you’ve only been doing this for 3 months. The concept of your site is cool, but how you implemente flash needs work. You might want to develope a cleaner and tighter looking layout by working on your typography and graphics. The font you have now is a bit hard to read so it discourages viewers from reading the info you’re trying to present. Good luck. =)