# An Image **URL:** https://forum.kirupa.com/t/an-image/185617 **Category:** design **Created:** [April 14, 2006, 6:31pm UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/an-image/185617 "2006-04-14T18:31:06Z") **Posts on this page:** 10 **Page:** 1
### Author: ![Yeldarb](https://avatars.discourse-cdn.com/v4/letter/y/51bf81/32.png) [@Yeldarb](https://forum.kirupa.com/u/Yeldarb) #### Post date: [April 14, 2006, 6:31pm UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/an-image/185617/1 "2006-04-14T18:31:06Z")
The assignment was to make a pattern, this is what I came up with. I have been trying to work on my typography lately. How does this look (overall) and what could I do to improve next time? ---
### Author: ![SelectionTool](https://avatars.discourse-cdn.com/v4/letter/s/ac8455/32.png) [@SelectionTool](https://forum.kirupa.com/u/SelectionTool) #### Post date: [April 14, 2006, 6:36pm UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/an-image/185617/2 "2006-04-14T18:36:47Z")
wierd but nicely made ---
### Author: ![icleric](https://avatars.discourse-cdn.com/v4/letter/i/4bbf92/32.png) [@icleric](https://forum.kirupa.com/u/icleric) #### Post date: [April 14, 2006, 7:11pm UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/an-image/185617/3 "2006-04-14T19:11:38Z")
realy nice, i like it :haha: ---
### Author: ![Theros](https://avatars.discourse-cdn.com/v4/letter/t/e5b9ba/32.png) [@Theros](https://forum.kirupa.com/u/Theros) #### Post date: [April 14, 2006, 8:30pm UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/an-image/185617/4 "2006-04-14T20:30:30Z")
I like it… but it reminds me of (Fill in blank…) 😛 ---
### Author: ![ApixDesigns](https://avatars.discourse-cdn.com/v4/letter/a/a88e57/32.png) [@ApixDesigns](https://forum.kirupa.com/u/ApixDesigns) #### Post date: [April 14, 2006, 11:43pm UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/an-image/185617/5 "2006-04-14T23:43:14Z")
just make the font a little greyer, like tune down the opacity a touch. ---
### Author: ![SPAD3S](https://avatars.discourse-cdn.com/v4/letter/s/a88e4f/32.png) [@SPAD3S](https://forum.kirupa.com/u/SPAD3S) #### Post date: [April 15, 2006, 1:22am UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/an-image/185617/6 "2006-04-15T01:22:16Z")
liking it ---
### Author: ![DDD](https://avatars.discourse-cdn.com/v4/letter/d/9fc348/32.png) [@DDD](https://forum.kirupa.com/u/DDD) #### Post date: [April 15, 2006, 2:08am UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/an-image/185617/7 "2006-04-15T02:08:40Z")
nice, weird, but nice. ---
### Author: ![hybrid101](https://avatars.discourse-cdn.com/v4/letter/h/7993a0/32.png) [@hybrid101](https://forum.kirupa.com/u/hybrid101) #### Post date: [April 15, 2006, 3:03am UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/an-image/185617/8 "2006-04-15T03:03:26Z")
is the G in together supposed to look like that? nice work btw:) ---
### Author: ![chapan](https://avatars.discourse-cdn.com/v4/letter/c/ecd19e/32.png) [@chapan](https://forum.kirupa.com/u/chapan) #### Post date: [April 17, 2006, 2:15am UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/an-image/185617/9 "2006-04-17T02:15:04Z")
i like it! but u might try to change color of the font for one of the words. maybe “together” or “yourselves” try make it red or something. maybe it wud look better. maybe it wont 😛 but i like it. ---
### Author: ![hl1](https://yyz1.discourse-cdn.com/flex011/user_avatar/forum.kirupa.com/hl1/32/849_2.png) [@hl1](https://forum.kirupa.com/u/hl1) #### Post date: [April 17, 2006, 2:19am UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/an-image/185617/10 "2006-04-17T02:19:22Z")
Reminds me of genitalia in a way ☹ Maybe I’m just perverted? I think you should try putting bodies in there and have them hold hands and feet together? (No faces)