# Another go with the logo critique **URL:** \ **Category:** Uncategorized\ **Created:** [May 27, 2004, 12:33am UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/another-go-with-the-logo-critique/111450 "2004-05-27T00:33:15Z")\ **Posts on this page:** 20\ **Page:** 1
**Author:** ![DDD](https://avatars.discourse-cdn.com/v4/letter/d/9fc348/32.png) [@DDD](https://forum.kirupa.com/u/DDD)\ **Post date:** [May 27, 2004, 12:33am UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/another-go-with-the-logo-critique/111450/1 "2004-05-27T00:33:15Z")
Okay here is another go with this logo. I decided to go full vector so it will be easy on the pocket book come print time. I kept it simple since alot of decisions are still in the air on this logo/site. Well once again let me have it. ---
**Author:** ![system](https://canada1.discourse-cdn.com/flex011/uploads/kirupa/original/3X/6/2/621e5c11736f46532526e61be85940af4230f3e5.png) [@system](https://forum.kirupa.com/u/system)\ **Post date:** [May 27, 2004, 12:48am UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/another-go-with-the-logo-critique/111450/2 "2004-05-27T00:48:26Z")
**much** better! I like 2a the best. Good work. ---
**Author:** ![system](https://canada1.discourse-cdn.com/flex011/uploads/kirupa/original/3X/6/2/621e5c11736f46532526e61be85940af4230f3e5.png) [@system](https://forum.kirupa.com/u/system)\ **Post date:** [May 27, 2004, 12:56am UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/another-go-with-the-logo-critique/111450/3 "2004-05-27T00:56:14Z")
yeah I like 2a too. I don’t like 1b or 3a because too many colors I guess. ---
**Author:** ![system](https://canada1.discourse-cdn.com/flex011/uploads/kirupa/original/3X/6/2/621e5c11736f46532526e61be85940af4230f3e5.png) [@system](https://forum.kirupa.com/u/system)\ **Post date:** [May 27, 2004, 2:05am UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/another-go-with-the-logo-critique/111450/4 "2004-05-27T02:05:22Z")
there ya go, those are a ton better. I don’t know which one i’d pick, but they are all exponentially better than your last attempt 😃 ---
**Author:** ![system](https://canada1.discourse-cdn.com/flex011/uploads/kirupa/original/3X/6/2/621e5c11736f46532526e61be85940af4230f3e5.png) [@system](https://forum.kirupa.com/u/system)\ **Post date:** [May 27, 2004, 2:12am UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/another-go-with-the-logo-critique/111450/5 "2004-05-27T02:12:34Z")
yea my last on was wack…BTW…this company specializes in data storage. ANd they provided a sketch that I had to follow so my creative latitude was limited. ---
**Author:** ![system](https://canada1.discourse-cdn.com/flex011/uploads/kirupa/original/3X/6/2/621e5c11736f46532526e61be85940af4230f3e5.png) [@system](https://forum.kirupa.com/u/system)\ **Post date:** [May 27, 2004, 2:31am UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/another-go-with-the-logo-critique/111450/6 "2004-05-27T02:31:17Z")
if it’s data storage then the keyhole idea might be something use. I like it now that I understand it. ---
**Author:** ![system](https://canada1.discourse-cdn.com/flex011/uploads/kirupa/original/3X/6/2/621e5c11736f46532526e61be85940af4230f3e5.png) [@system](https://forum.kirupa.com/u/system)\ **Post date:** [May 27, 2004, 2:36am UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/another-go-with-the-logo-critique/111450/7 "2004-05-27T02:36:44Z")
Nice work dude. these look hot, well done :thumb: -designer 1 : client 0. lol Try to push 2b that concept is funky, love the way you incorporated that lock. thats my fav! 😉 ---
**Author:** ![system](https://canada1.discourse-cdn.com/flex011/uploads/kirupa/original/3X/6/2/621e5c11736f46532526e61be85940af4230f3e5.png) [@system](https://forum.kirupa.com/u/system)\ **Post date:** [May 27, 2004, 2:40am UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/another-go-with-the-logo-critique/111450/8 "2004-05-27T02:40:19Z")
2a looks great man! But I was thinking about 2b, and I think there is just something minor that needs to be modified for it to look perfect… I don’t really know what it is, but I think it could look a little distorted. Seems it’s not in the right postion along a Z axis… Try fiddling with it, and I’m sure it would turn out great 😉 ---
**Author:** ![system](https://canada1.discourse-cdn.com/flex011/uploads/kirupa/original/3X/6/2/621e5c11736f46532526e61be85940af4230f3e5.png) [@system](https://forum.kirupa.com/u/system)\ **Post date:** [May 27, 2004, 3:06am UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/another-go-with-the-logo-critique/111450/9 "2004-05-27T03:06:38Z")
2b…I love both 2a and 2b but like xxvviii said the keyhole idea works so I say 2b ---
**Author:** ![system](https://canada1.discourse-cdn.com/flex011/uploads/kirupa/original/3X/6/2/621e5c11736f46532526e61be85940af4230f3e5.png) [@system](https://forum.kirupa.com/u/system)\ **Post date:** [May 27, 2004, 3:11am UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/another-go-with-the-logo-critique/111450/10 "2004-05-27T03:11:17Z")
2b rocks i love the keyhole 😉 ---
**Author:** ![system](https://canada1.discourse-cdn.com/flex011/uploads/kirupa/original/3X/6/2/621e5c11736f46532526e61be85940af4230f3e5.png) [@system](https://forum.kirupa.com/u/system)\ **Post date:** [May 27, 2004, 4:49am UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/another-go-with-the-logo-critique/111450/11 "2004-05-27T04:49:57Z")
2b, but I don`t really like that violet...( it doesn`t seems to match with the subject) I think you should try some blue. You could try to make the “E” in the box a minuscule, just like the one in “edge”. ---
**Author:** ![system](https://canada1.discourse-cdn.com/flex011/uploads/kirupa/original/3X/6/2/621e5c11736f46532526e61be85940af4230f3e5.png) [@system](https://forum.kirupa.com/u/system)\ **Post date:** [May 27, 2004, 5:00am UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/another-go-with-the-logo-critique/111450/12 "2004-05-27T05:00:33Z")
2b rules, but instead of a purple theme, use blue. much cooler 🙂 ---
**Author:** ![system](https://canada1.discourse-cdn.com/flex011/uploads/kirupa/original/3X/6/2/621e5c11736f46532526e61be85940af4230f3e5.png) [@system](https://forum.kirupa.com/u/system)\ **Post date:** [May 27, 2004, 5:05am UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/another-go-with-the-logo-critique/111450/13 "2004-05-27T05:05:03Z")
he can’t change the colors – the client picked them. 😉 as for my choice, I definitely have to go with 2a. I’m not feelin the keyhole, regardless of knowing what the company does. I think it clutters up an already busy set. These are definitely better DDD – very nice. =) ---
**Author:** ![system](https://canada1.discourse-cdn.com/flex011/uploads/kirupa/original/3X/6/2/621e5c11736f46532526e61be85940af4230f3e5.png) [@system](https://forum.kirupa.com/u/system)\ **Post date:** [May 27, 2004, 5:30am UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/another-go-with-the-logo-critique/111450/14 "2004-05-27T05:30:52Z")
I’d go with 2b because as soon as I saw the words “data access” I thought, “Hmmm…that should be a secure data access.” or something of that sort. You wanna give the user a warm fuzzy feeling even if they don’t realize they’re getting it. Know what I mean. ---
**Author:** ![system](https://canada1.discourse-cdn.com/flex011/uploads/kirupa/original/3X/6/2/621e5c11736f46532526e61be85940af4230f3e5.png) [@system](https://forum.kirupa.com/u/system)\ **Post date:** [May 27, 2004, 7:55am UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/another-go-with-the-logo-critique/111450/15 "2004-05-27T07:55:16Z")
i’d say 2b too, love the idea of the keyhole :thumb: ---
**Author:** ![system](https://canada1.discourse-cdn.com/flex011/uploads/kirupa/original/3X/6/2/621e5c11736f46532526e61be85940af4230f3e5.png) [@system](https://forum.kirupa.com/u/system)\ **Post date:** [May 27, 2004, 9:02am UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/another-go-with-the-logo-critique/111450/16 "2004-05-27T09:02:45Z")
go with 2b / keyhole, maybe make it a tad darker it washes out with light backgrounds…Good job ---
**Author:** ![system](https://canada1.discourse-cdn.com/flex011/uploads/kirupa/original/3X/6/2/621e5c11736f46532526e61be85940af4230f3e5.png) [@system](https://forum.kirupa.com/u/system)\ **Post date:** [May 27, 2004, 6:52pm UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/another-go-with-the-logo-critique/111450/17 "2004-05-27T18:52:12Z")
I think 2b is your best fit. Try making the keyhole larger (logos need to be very clear at pretty much any size) and mess around with its perspective a little more. Other than that, awesome design. ---
**Author:** ![system](https://canada1.discourse-cdn.com/flex011/uploads/kirupa/original/3X/6/2/621e5c11736f46532526e61be85940af4230f3e5.png) [@system](https://forum.kirupa.com/u/system)\ **Post date:** [May 27, 2004, 6:58pm UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/another-go-with-the-logo-critique/111450/18 "2004-05-27T18:58:28Z")
I like 2b the best too but since the cube isn’t a perfect cube it looks a bit distorted and flat. Did you intentionally not make the logo perfectly square? Just curious . . . The client should love this though - great job! :thumb: :A+: ---
**Author:** ![system](https://canada1.discourse-cdn.com/flex011/uploads/kirupa/original/3X/6/2/621e5c11736f46532526e61be85940af4230f3e5.png) [@system](https://forum.kirupa.com/u/system)\ **Post date:** [May 27, 2004, 7:16pm UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/another-go-with-the-logo-critique/111450/19 "2004-05-27T19:16:54Z")
thanks @lunatic Yeah it is actaully a trace of a perspective cube from lightwave. I tried to get the camera angle when you see all sides pretty evenly. I thought about doing an isometric cube but didnt. I added the line around 2a and 2b to give it that flat yet 3d look. I’ll let ya’ll know the client feedback ---
**Author:** ![system](https://canada1.discourse-cdn.com/flex011/uploads/kirupa/original/3X/6/2/621e5c11736f46532526e61be85940af4230f3e5.png) [@system](https://forum.kirupa.com/u/system)\ **Post date:** [May 28, 2004, 7:33pm UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/another-go-with-the-logo-critique/111450/20 "2004-05-28T19:33:21Z")
1b 2b 3a I like the color addition. on 1b the top and flaps might look good in a royal blue [Next page](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/another-go-with-the-logo-critique/111450.md?page=2)