# Another site critique

**URL:** <https://forum.kirupa.com/t/another-site-critique/232095>\
**Category:** design\
**Created:** [July 11, 2007, 7:16am UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/another-site-critique/232095 "2007-07-11T07:16:17Z")\
**Posts on this page:** 1\
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**Author:** ![hamburgerlove41](https://avatars.discourse-cdn.com/v4/letter/h/edb3f5/32.png) [@hamburgerlove41](https://forum.kirupa.com/u/hamburgerlove41)\
**Post date:** [July 11, 2007, 7:16am UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/another-site-critique/232095/1 "2007-07-11T07:16:17Z")

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hey,  
heres another site for critiqueing. This one is for a college-aged worship service. Let me know what could be fixed/changed. Right now, I’m already thinking it’s just too big and and cluttered. I’m also not sure about some of the color choices, AND i may have overdone it with the tape and drop shadows. I know I use the ink splatters alot, but they really want a cliched (not their words), run-of-the-mill website. ok, thanks.

[![](http://www.immersed.us/index.jpg) ](http://www.immersed.us/index.jpg)

ps: sorry i never responded again to my last thread, so thanks to everyone for helping out.