# Artwork needs critique

**URL:** https://forum.kirupa.com/t/artwork-needs-critique/175868
**Category:** design
**Created:** [January 18, 2006, 1:52pm UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/artwork-needs-critique/175868 "2006-01-18T13:52:10Z")
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### Author: ![e\_sarbak](https://avatars.discourse-cdn.com/v4/letter/e/eb9ed0/32.png) [@e\_sarbak](https://forum.kirupa.com/u/e_sarbak)
#### Post date: [January 18, 2006, 1:52pm UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/artwork-needs-critique/175868/1 "2006-01-18T13:52:10Z")

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:sigh: After I bought a new TechnomarineMaori watch, I tried to draw a B&W vectoral design. Here is the outcome and it needs your contsructive criticism…

:bu:here is the link: [http://www.deviantart.com/view/27850698/](http://www.deviantart.com/view/27850698/)

:sc: for my other artworks: [http://e-sarbak.deviantart.com](http://e-sarbak.deviantart.com)

Thx…