# Banner Critique

**URL:** <https://forum.kirupa.com/t/banner-critique/61425>\
**Category:** design\
**Created:** [August 18, 2004, 1:48pm UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/banner-critique/61425 "2004-08-18T13:48:06Z")\
**Posts on this page:** 5\
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**Author:** ![red\_A](https://avatars.discourse-cdn.com/v4/letter/r/48db29/32.png) [@red\_A](https://forum.kirupa.com/u/red_A)\
**Post date:** [August 18, 2004, 1:48pm UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/banner-critique/61425/1 "2004-08-18T13:48:06Z")

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what do you think? i know it sucks! any input on improving it is welcome!

Thanks,  
Albert

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**Author:** ![system](https://canada1.discourse-cdn.com/flex011/uploads/kirupa/original/3X/6/2/621e5c11736f46532526e61be85940af4230f3e5.png) [@system](https://forum.kirupa.com/u/system)\
**Post date:** [August 18, 2004, 1:55pm UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/banner-critique/61425/2 "2004-08-18T13:55:06Z")

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its a good start, simple and clean…what is the banner for?

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**Author:** ![system](https://canada1.discourse-cdn.com/flex011/uploads/kirupa/original/3X/6/2/621e5c11736f46532526e61be85940af4230f3e5.png) [@system](https://forum.kirupa.com/u/system)\
**Post date:** [August 18, 2004, 2:42pm UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/banner-critique/61425/3 "2004-08-18T14:42:03Z")

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Thanks 🙂 it’s meant to be nice and clean, it’s for my work, I’m adding a new section to our Intranet that will serve as guide to the city and will contain info on useful stuff like where the restaurants are, polica, hospitals, theaters, cinema etc etc… and i wanted to create a banner for the section, this is one of them, i also wana do 2-3 more different ones and have them change every refresh, so that no one dies of bordom 🙂

-Albert

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**Author:** ![system](https://canada1.discourse-cdn.com/flex011/uploads/kirupa/original/3X/6/2/621e5c11736f46532526e61be85940af4230f3e5.png) [@system](https://forum.kirupa.com/u/system)\
**Post date:** [August 18, 2004, 2:44pm UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/banner-critique/61425/4 "2004-08-18T14:44:13Z")

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as a simple banner, its great - and nice quality too. the two opposite parenthesis (no idea what else to call them) was a great idea.

But if you’re going to make it a site layout basis, i suggest adding more around it. dont’ add to it, just around it.

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**Author:** ![system](https://canada1.discourse-cdn.com/flex011/uploads/kirupa/original/3X/6/2/621e5c11736f46532526e61be85940af4230f3e5.png) [@system](https://forum.kirupa.com/u/system)\
**Post date:** [August 19, 2004, 8:32am UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/banner-critique/61425/5 "2004-08-19T08:32:21Z")

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What do you mean by add around it, around the parenthesis or around the outer images…and add what, effects? brushe strokes??