# Battle Character **URL:** \ **Category:** design\ **Created:** [May 14, 2003, 9:51pm UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/battle-character/20930 "2003-05-14T21:51:51Z")\ **Posts on this page:** 20\ **Page:** 1
**Author:** ![Jubba](https://avatars.discourse-cdn.com/v4/letter/j/90ced4/32.png) [@Jubba](https://forum.kirupa.com/u/Jubba)\ **Post date:** [May 14, 2003, 9:51pm UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/battle-character/20930/1 "2003-05-14T21:51:51Z")
Its still a work in progress but I thought that I would get some comments or suggestions before I finish and maybe I can alter it a bit according to suggestions. What do you think? **I uploaded the newest version** ---
**Author:** ![system](https://canada1.discourse-cdn.com/flex011/uploads/kirupa/original/3X/6/2/621e5c11736f46532526e61be85940af4230f3e5.png) [@system](https://forum.kirupa.com/u/system)\ **Post date:** [May 14, 2003, 11:26pm UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/battle-character/20930/2 "2003-05-14T23:26:00Z")
i like the head and hair especially but the wings’ shape is weird ---
**Author:** ![system](https://canada1.discourse-cdn.com/flex011/uploads/kirupa/original/3X/6/2/621e5c11736f46532526e61be85940af4230f3e5.png) [@system](https://forum.kirupa.com/u/system)\ **Post date:** [May 14, 2003, 11:38pm UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/battle-character/20930/3 "2003-05-14T23:38:26Z")
oh sweet! thats dope! ---
**Author:** ![system](https://canada1.discourse-cdn.com/flex011/uploads/kirupa/original/3X/6/2/621e5c11736f46532526e61be85940af4230f3e5.png) [@system](https://forum.kirupa.com/u/system)\ **Post date:** [May 14, 2003, 11:39pm UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/battle-character/20930/4 "2003-05-14T23:39:39Z")
Here’s the _almost_ finished thing… ---
**Author:** ![system](https://canada1.discourse-cdn.com/flex011/uploads/kirupa/original/3X/6/2/621e5c11736f46532526e61be85940af4230f3e5.png) [@system](https://forum.kirupa.com/u/system)\ **Post date:** [May 14, 2003, 11:41pm UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/battle-character/20930/5 "2003-05-14T23:41:07Z")
i kninda dug the black bg more. but otherwise (minus the low quality) it looks reallly nice! ---
**Author:** ![system](https://canada1.discourse-cdn.com/flex011/uploads/kirupa/original/3X/6/2/621e5c11736f46532526e61be85940af4230f3e5.png) [@system](https://forum.kirupa.com/u/system)\ **Post date:** [May 14, 2003, 11:58pm UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/battle-character/20930/6 "2003-05-14T23:58:50Z")
Quality check… ---
**Author:** ![system](https://canada1.discourse-cdn.com/flex011/uploads/kirupa/original/3X/6/2/621e5c11736f46532526e61be85940af4230f3e5.png) [@system](https://forum.kirupa.com/u/system)\ **Post date:** [May 15, 2003, 12:03am UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/battle-character/20930/7 "2003-05-15T00:03:02Z")
that i like! ---
**Author:** ![system](https://canada1.discourse-cdn.com/flex011/uploads/kirupa/original/3X/6/2/621e5c11736f46532526e61be85940af4230f3e5.png) [@system](https://forum.kirupa.com/u/system)\ **Post date:** [May 15, 2003, 5:38am UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/battle-character/20930/8 "2003-05-15T05:38:22Z")
i don’t really know what kind of look you’re going for, so i’ll just make my comment general and you can ignore it if you want… for humans, the head is usually about 1/8th of the full body (in size), so your character is a bit short (or the head is a bit big) technically speaking, although i don’t think you’re going for uber-realistic, are you? anyway, nice job overall ---
**Author:** ![system](https://canada1.discourse-cdn.com/flex011/uploads/kirupa/original/3X/6/2/621e5c11736f46532526e61be85940af4230f3e5.png) [@system](https://forum.kirupa.com/u/system)\ **Post date:** [May 15, 2003, 6:16pm UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/battle-character/20930/9 "2003-05-15T18:16:05Z")
Yeah, I know about the human ratio aspect for drawing, but since its supposed to by kind of cartoony I left it slightly large. Thanks 🙂 Typical male figures are 7.5 heads and females are typically 7 heads according to my memory cells… ---
**Author:** ![system](https://canada1.discourse-cdn.com/flex011/uploads/kirupa/original/3X/6/2/621e5c11736f46532526e61be85940af4230f3e5.png) [@system](https://forum.kirupa.com/u/system)\ **Post date:** [May 15, 2003, 7:17pm UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/battle-character/20930/10 "2003-05-15T19:17:51Z")
for some reason it reminds me of the character from Devil May Cry… but still some nice work you done there… well done. 🙂 ---
**Author:** ![system](https://canada1.discourse-cdn.com/flex011/uploads/kirupa/original/3X/6/2/621e5c11736f46532526e61be85940af4230f3e5.png) [@system](https://forum.kirupa.com/u/system)\ **Post date:** [May 15, 2003, 7:46pm UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/battle-character/20930/11 "2003-05-15T19:46:33Z")
Nah, I don’t think so. Lol, the DMC characters are drawn amazingly well! 😛 ---
**Author:** ![system](https://canada1.discourse-cdn.com/flex011/uploads/kirupa/original/3X/6/2/621e5c11736f46532526e61be85940af4230f3e5.png) [@system](https://forum.kirupa.com/u/system)\ **Post date:** [May 15, 2003, 7:49pm UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/battle-character/20930/12 "2003-05-15T19:49:19Z")
but this isnt bad. ---
**Author:** ![system](https://canada1.discourse-cdn.com/flex011/uploads/kirupa/original/3X/6/2/621e5c11736f46532526e61be85940af4230f3e5.png) [@system](https://forum.kirupa.com/u/system)\ **Post date:** [May 15, 2003, 7:59pm UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/battle-character/20930/13 "2003-05-15T19:59:41Z")
I’m actually quite proud. The only thing I looked at for reference was a picture of my head. Everything else was out of my head with my mouse. First ever line-art. I think it turned out pretty well… ---
**Author:** ![system](https://canada1.discourse-cdn.com/flex011/uploads/kirupa/original/3X/6/2/621e5c11736f46532526e61be85940af4230f3e5.png) [@system](https://forum.kirupa.com/u/system)\ **Post date:** [May 16, 2003, 10:20am UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/battle-character/20930/14 "2003-05-16T10:20:26Z")
There’s something great about winged humans. Nice work. ---
**Author:** ![system](https://canada1.discourse-cdn.com/flex011/uploads/kirupa/original/3X/6/2/621e5c11736f46532526e61be85940af4230f3e5.png) [@system](https://forum.kirupa.com/u/system)\ **Post date:** [May 16, 2003, 10:32am UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/battle-character/20930/15 "2003-05-16T10:32:47Z")
The guy you’re thinking of is called Dante. 🙂 It’s the black and red that does that - he reminds me of a cross between Dante and Vincent from FF7. 🙂 But it’s very good, Jubba. Especially if this is indeed your first ever line art piece. 🙂 My first attempt didn’t look anywhere near as good as that. 🙂 ---
**Author:** ![system](https://canada1.discourse-cdn.com/flex011/uploads/kirupa/original/3X/6/2/621e5c11736f46532526e61be85940af4230f3e5.png) [@system](https://forum.kirupa.com/u/system)\ **Post date:** [May 16, 2003, 10:40am UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/battle-character/20930/16 "2003-05-16T10:40:23Z")
DMC is a feel good game… is easy to do stuff thats makes you look awsome… “and they said play DMC when you are down and thou frown was gone” ---
**Author:** ![system](https://canada1.discourse-cdn.com/flex011/uploads/kirupa/original/3X/6/2/621e5c11736f46532526e61be85940af4230f3e5.png) [@system](https://forum.kirupa.com/u/system)\ **Post date:** [May 16, 2003, 6:13pm UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/battle-character/20930/17 "2003-05-16T18:13:45Z")
Why does the guy look a bit camp? Really good though ---
**Author:** ![system](https://canada1.discourse-cdn.com/flex011/uploads/kirupa/original/3X/6/2/621e5c11736f46532526e61be85940af4230f3e5.png) [@system](https://forum.kirupa.com/u/system)\ **Post date:** [May 16, 2003, 6:31pm UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/battle-character/20930/18 "2003-05-16T18:31:45Z")
camp? ---
**Author:** ![system](https://canada1.discourse-cdn.com/flex011/uploads/kirupa/original/3X/6/2/621e5c11736f46532526e61be85940af4230f3e5.png) [@system](https://forum.kirupa.com/u/system)\ **Post date:** [May 19, 2003, 9:54am UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/battle-character/20930/19 "2003-05-19T09:54:11Z")
You know…a bit fruity. A bit 🔗 ---
**Author:** ![system](https://canada1.discourse-cdn.com/flex011/uploads/kirupa/original/3X/6/2/621e5c11736f46532526e61be85940af4230f3e5.png) [@system](https://forum.kirupa.com/u/system)\ **Post date:** [May 19, 2003, 10:38am UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/battle-character/20930/20 "2003-05-19T10:38:48Z")
a bit gay i think he means… not actually gay just looks it… a bit harsh i think! [Next page](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/battle-character/20930.md?page=2)