# Better swf with good critiques

**URL:** <https://forum.kirupa.com/t/better-swf-with-good-critiques/69953>\
**Category:** design\
**Created:** [November 9, 2004, 2:24pm UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/better-swf-with-good-critiques/69953 "2004-11-09T14:24:03Z")\
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**Author:** ![e\_sarbak](https://avatars.discourse-cdn.com/v4/letter/e/eb9ed0/32.png) [@e\_sarbak](https://forum.kirupa.com/u/e_sarbak)\
**Post date:** [November 9, 2004, 2:24pm UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/better-swf-with-good-critiques/69953/1 "2004-11-09T14:24:03Z")

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:nerd:Here is my site’s base  
I need your helps  
please :ne: criticise freely:D

My little wonder is :sure:  
[http://escc.sitemynet.com/fafflash.swf](http://escc.sitemynet.com/fafflash.swf)

:geek:This is my first 😉 professional site attempt:block: