# Brochure for crtique......!

**URL:** <https://forum.kirupa.com/t/brochure-for-crtique/252186>\
**Category:** Uncategorized\
**Created:** [February 17, 2008, 4:37pm UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/brochure-for-crtique/252186 "2008-02-17T16:37:15Z")\
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**Author:** ![jaevion4u](https://avatars.discourse-cdn.com/v4/letter/j/3da27b/32.png) [@jaevion4u](https://forum.kirupa.com/u/jaevion4u)\
**Post date:** [February 17, 2008, 4:37pm UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/brochure-for-crtique/252186/1 "2008-02-17T16:37:15Z")

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Hey Y’all please tell me what you think of my work… I am thinking to block out that mic on the JYAN thing and just make it all black and simple. What ya think?

I dont liek the programs page. I think its abit too dry and full of copy (text).

The cover  
 ![](http://forum.kirupa.com/uploads/kirupa/4315/f8741a0a33ca0cbf.jpg)

![](http://forum.kirupa.com/uploads/kirupa/4317/ccdaf09a60be4d0e.jpg)

![](http://forum.kirupa.com/uploads/kirupa/4318/b51237f5a5a5d09b.jpg)

![](http://forum.kirupa.com/uploads/kirupa/4319/e863f17f23d3dab5.jpg)
