# Business card critique please

**URL:** <https://forum.kirupa.com/t/business-card-critique-please/90894>\
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**Created:** [May 21, 2005, 9:46pm UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/business-card-critique-please/90894 "2005-05-21T21:46:22Z")\
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**Author:** ![sleek20](https://avatars.discourse-cdn.com/v4/letter/s/b5ac83/32.png) [@sleek20](https://forum.kirupa.com/u/sleek20)\
**Post date:** [May 21, 2005, 9:46pm UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/business-card-critique-please/90894/1 "2005-05-21T21:46:22Z")

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Hello all,

First of all I must say this is my first post and I have been visiting this site forever and a day and there is a tremendous amount of talent around.

I designed two business cards and a logo for a friend of mine (you can see it on the brushed alum card). He is a computer IT administrator so I was going for a techy look.

I would like some critiques please.  
thanks.