# Can I get your critique?

**URL:** <https://forum.kirupa.com/t/can-i-get-your-critique/238585>\
**Category:** design\
**Created:** [September 12, 2007, 9:10pm UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/can-i-get-your-critique/238585 "2007-09-12T21:10:52Z")\
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**Author:** ![lilymc](https://yyz1.discourse-cdn.com/flex011/user_avatar/forum.kirupa.com/lilymc/32/3676_2.png) [@lilymc](https://forum.kirupa.com/u/lilymc)\
**Post date:** [September 12, 2007, 9:10pm UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/can-i-get-your-critique/238585/1 "2007-09-12T21:10:52Z")

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This is another site I’ve been working on, and I really could use some fresh eyes. The style is supposed to be like a magazine, (originally it looked more like that) but after changing some stuff, I’m wondering if it looks too busy, or if the layout/color combinations look ok.

I can’t make major changes, because we already agreed on the general look of it, but if you have any suggestions on things to improve it, that would be great.

Thanks! 🙂

**[{ squeeze }](http://www.starryskymedia.com/bnp/index.html)**

ps - the bottom part isn’t finished, that part really needs to be changed.