# Check check! **URL:** \ **Category:** Uncategorized\ **Created:** [August 6, 2003, 6:15pm UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/check-check/27794 "2003-08-06T18:15:32Z")\ **Posts on this page:** 16\ **Page:** 1
**Author:** ![freshgirl](https://avatars.discourse-cdn.com/v4/letter/f/a6a055/32.png) [@freshgirl](https://forum.kirupa.com/u/freshgirl)\ **Post date:** [August 6, 2003, 6:15pm UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/check-check/27794/1 "2003-08-06T18:15:32Z")
hi everyone. i’m new here, and i hope the forum gives me some good feedback!lol… check out my portfolio: [www.freshmediadesign.com](http://www.freshmediadesign.com) please give me some feedback on what is good, and what could be changed. private messages to me with your comments woudl be good. if you dont want to make it private…its ok! cheers! fresh\<:} ---
**Author:** ![system](https://canada1.discourse-cdn.com/flex011/uploads/kirupa/original/3X/6/2/621e5c11736f46532526e61be85940af4230f3e5.png) [@system](https://forum.kirupa.com/u/system)\ **Post date:** [August 6, 2003, 6:20pm UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/check-check/27794/2 "2003-08-06T18:20:59Z")
holy cow ---
**Author:** ![system](https://canada1.discourse-cdn.com/flex011/uploads/kirupa/original/3X/6/2/621e5c11736f46532526e61be85940af4230f3e5.png) [@system](https://forum.kirupa.com/u/system)\ **Post date:** [August 6, 2003, 6:32pm UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/check-check/27794/3 "2003-08-06T18:32:27Z")
very nice. pretty smooth transitions, one thing i would fix it the hit area of the text for selection… you have to be over the text before the cursor becomes a hand… otherwise - outstanding. ---
**Author:** ![system](https://canada1.discourse-cdn.com/flex011/uploads/kirupa/original/3X/6/2/621e5c11736f46532526e61be85940af4230f3e5.png) [@system](https://forum.kirupa.com/u/system)\ **Post date:** [August 6, 2003, 6:43pm UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/check-check/27794/4 "2003-08-06T18:43:08Z")
yea nice work… like the sillhoeute ---
**Author:** ![system](https://canada1.discourse-cdn.com/flex011/uploads/kirupa/original/3X/6/2/621e5c11736f46532526e61be85940af4230f3e5.png) [@system](https://forum.kirupa.com/u/system)\ **Post date:** [August 6, 2003, 6:44pm UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/check-check/27794/5 "2003-08-06T18:44:28Z")
hiphop. -respect. ---
**Author:** ![system](https://canada1.discourse-cdn.com/flex011/uploads/kirupa/original/3X/6/2/621e5c11736f46532526e61be85940af4230f3e5.png) [@system](https://forum.kirupa.com/u/system)\ **Post date:** [August 6, 2003, 7:46pm UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/check-check/27794/6 "2003-08-06T19:46:25Z")
Nice work - then again it wasnt really work was it… all fun One thing dont hide the selection bar on the left after a bio, profile , etc has been made.:p: ---
**Author:** ![system](https://canada1.discourse-cdn.com/flex011/uploads/kirupa/original/3X/6/2/621e5c11736f46532526e61be85940af4230f3e5.png) [@system](https://forum.kirupa.com/u/system)\ **Post date:** [August 6, 2003, 8:16pm UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/check-check/27794/7 "2003-08-06T20:16:18Z")
I would make two arrows instead of scroll word on gray button, intro is fun, girly pinky color, but I like it, I like how everything flows with sounds, great 🙂 menu…on mouse out the button dont make the same effect…confuses my eye, like make just rollover effect, without rollover out…when menu closes and its like in the corner…its cool, but lets say u want to go back to ur menu, make it on mouse over rather then mouse click, and I would like to see opening of the menu the same way it closes just oposite directions. That dancing vector gives life to your site and it goes great with sound:P Its nice, simple and clean. I like it! peace ---
**Author:** ![system](https://canada1.discourse-cdn.com/flex011/uploads/kirupa/original/3X/6/2/621e5c11736f46532526e61be85940af4230f3e5.png) [@system](https://forum.kirupa.com/u/system)\ **Post date:** [August 6, 2003, 8:48pm UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/check-check/27794/8 "2003-08-06T20:48:21Z")
The girl in the background was what impressed me the most about the site, but here are a few things I want to point out. 1. Your music loop doesn’t lopp perfectly, but it was barely noticable. 2. I like the way you laid out your content, but the way the portfolio section is laid out is really messy. I don’t like how things are scattered. I like how things are grouped nicely together like your other sections. 3. This isn’t a big deal, but you should have the music bars stop when the music is turned off. Overall nice job though, love the mood your site creates. I feel like dancing. 😛 ---
**Author:** ![system](https://canada1.discourse-cdn.com/flex011/uploads/kirupa/original/3X/6/2/621e5c11736f46532526e61be85940af4230f3e5.png) [@system](https://forum.kirupa.com/u/system)\ **Post date:** [August 6, 2003, 9:25pm UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/check-check/27794/9 "2003-08-06T21:25:46Z")
thnx for the replys guys. yeah i get alot of suggestions about the navigation bar. funny…the one suggested that idea to me was my instructor… so that i would have more room on the stage for other stuff thnx guys! electrongeek, MrMass , gak gak gak rosie. ---
**Author:** ![system](https://canada1.discourse-cdn.com/flex011/uploads/kirupa/original/3X/6/2/621e5c11736f46532526e61be85940af4230f3e5.png) [@system](https://forum.kirupa.com/u/system)\ **Post date:** [August 6, 2003, 11:06pm UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/check-check/27794/10 "2003-08-06T23:06:19Z")
Howd u get that vector profile of a girl, is it a video or vectorized pictures? Its awesome. Keep flashing. 🙂 ---
**Author:** ![system](https://canada1.discourse-cdn.com/flex011/uploads/kirupa/original/3X/6/2/621e5c11736f46532526e61be85940af4230f3e5.png) [@system](https://forum.kirupa.com/u/system)\ **Post date:** [August 6, 2003, 11:23pm UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/check-check/27794/11 "2003-08-06T23:23:00Z")
Very NICE work everything goes and look purfectly good job ---
**Author:** ![system](https://canada1.discourse-cdn.com/flex011/uploads/kirupa/original/3X/6/2/621e5c11736f46532526e61be85940af4230f3e5.png) [@system](https://forum.kirupa.com/u/system)\ **Post date:** [August 7, 2003, 1:45am UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/check-check/27794/12 "2003-08-07T01:45:04Z")
[QUOTE]\*Originally posted by freshgirl \* \*\* thnx guys! electrongeek, MrMass , gak gak gak np:thumb: ---
**Author:** ![system](https://canada1.discourse-cdn.com/flex011/uploads/kirupa/original/3X/6/2/621e5c11736f46532526e61be85940af4230f3e5.png) [@system](https://forum.kirupa.com/u/system)\ **Post date:** [August 7, 2003, 5:08am UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/check-check/27794/13 "2003-08-07T05:08:10Z")
Nice work but I’d fix the sound loops. There are some spots where the transistion isn’t so smooth (when repeating). Aside from that, nice innovative, creative work. ---
**Author:** ![system](https://canada1.discourse-cdn.com/flex011/uploads/kirupa/original/3X/6/2/621e5c11736f46532526e61be85940af4230f3e5.png) [@system](https://forum.kirupa.com/u/system)\ **Post date:** [August 7, 2003, 6:13am UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/check-check/27794/14 "2003-08-07T06:13:21Z")
i like it, but as mentioned earlier, the loop needs to be fixed, and i wouldn’t use a pop-up though 🙂 oh, seeing you’re from van-city, you might wanna check out this site and maybe talk with the site’s admin anne-marie, you might get listed on her site 🙂 [http://flashgoddess.com/](http://flashgoddess.com/) ---
**Author:** ![system](https://canada1.discourse-cdn.com/flex011/uploads/kirupa/original/3X/6/2/621e5c11736f46532526e61be85940af4230f3e5.png) [@system](https://forum.kirupa.com/u/system)\ **Post date:** [August 8, 2003, 5:40am UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/check-check/27794/15 "2003-08-08T05:40:59Z")
wow… that was awsome! 🙂 very original and very inspiring!! ---
**Author:** ![system](https://canada1.discourse-cdn.com/flex011/uploads/kirupa/original/3X/6/2/621e5c11736f46532526e61be85940af4230f3e5.png) [@system](https://forum.kirupa.com/u/system)\ **Post date:** [August 8, 2003, 8:33am UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/check-check/27794/16 "2003-08-08T08:33:04Z")
Agree with EG - dancing girl fantastic idea that’s done really well. Great site, Rosie.