# Check out this halfdone intro

**URL:** <https://forum.kirupa.com/t/check-out-this-halfdone-intro/8255>\
**Category:** design\
**Created:** [November 16, 2002, 8:27pm UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/check-out-this-halfdone-intro/8255 "2002-11-16T20:27:32Z")\
**Posts on this page:** 6\
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**Author:** ![pointlessthings](https://avatars.discourse-cdn.com/v4/letter/p/c5a1d2/32.png) [@pointlessthings](https://forum.kirupa.com/u/pointlessthings)\
**Post date:** [November 16, 2002, 8:27pm UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/check-out-this-halfdone-intro/8255/1 "2002-11-16T20:27:32Z")

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i am working on an intro, it isn’t nearly done yet, but could you ugys please take a look at it and give me some feedback…

[CLICK HERE FOR INTRO](http://grafdesign.pointlessthings.com/intro1.html)

_pt_

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**Author:** ![system](https://canada1.discourse-cdn.com/flex011/uploads/kirupa/original/3X/6/2/621e5c11736f46532526e61be85940af4230f3e5.png) [@system](https://forum.kirupa.com/u/system)\
**Post date:** [November 16, 2002, 9:27pm UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/check-out-this-halfdone-intro/8255/2 "2002-11-16T21:27:30Z")

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Its not bad, a good start - I’d say it is a little on the plain side, could use a bit more excitement. Also as you move from one statement to the next, I would stop the animation in the previous, it is a bit distracting as they all keep going. Keep at it!

Peace

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**Author:** ![system](https://canada1.discourse-cdn.com/flex011/uploads/kirupa/original/3X/6/2/621e5c11736f46532526e61be85940af4230f3e5.png) [@system](https://forum.kirupa.com/u/system)\
**Post date:** [November 16, 2002, 11:12pm UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/check-out-this-halfdone-intro/8255/3 "2002-11-16T23:12:31Z")

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when i saw the movie form the first look, okay i liked it, but when the orange titles started counting uo, hmm, was’nt so cool, first of all, i would recommened adding sound, and, removing some of those sentences! 🙂

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**Author:** ![system](https://canada1.discourse-cdn.com/flex011/uploads/kirupa/original/3X/6/2/621e5c11736f46532526e61be85940af4230f3e5.png) [@system](https://forum.kirupa.com/u/system)\
**Post date:** [November 16, 2002, 11:21pm UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/check-out-this-halfdone-intro/8255/4 "2002-11-16T23:21:58Z")

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ok…well if i take out the sentences the intro will have no content at all?

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**Author:** ![system](https://canada1.discourse-cdn.com/flex011/uploads/kirupa/original/3X/6/2/621e5c11736f46532526e61be85940af4230f3e5.png) [@system](https://forum.kirupa.com/u/system)\
**Post date:** [November 16, 2002, 11:22pm UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/check-out-this-halfdone-intro/8255/5 "2002-11-16T23:22:35Z")

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hehe, didnt mean all of them though!

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**Author:** ![system](https://canada1.discourse-cdn.com/flex011/uploads/kirupa/original/3X/6/2/621e5c11736f46532526e61be85940af4230f3e5.png) [@system](https://forum.kirupa.com/u/system)\
**Post date:** [November 16, 2002, 11:29pm UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/check-out-this-halfdone-intro/8255/6 "2002-11-16T23:29:44Z")

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i dont like it. for a design intro, it seems very plain, and unorganized. its kinda laggy w/ the mask too.