# Check please

**URL:** <https://forum.kirupa.com/t/check-please/38217>\
**Category:** Uncategorized\
**Created:** [December 19, 2003, 3:49pm UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/check-please/38217 "2003-12-19T15:49:19Z")\
**Posts on this page:** 7\
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**Author:** ![Wayne](https://yyz1.discourse-cdn.com/flex011/user_avatar/forum.kirupa.com/wayne/32/16501_2.png) [@Wayne](https://forum.kirupa.com/u/Wayne)\
**Post date:** [December 19, 2003, 3:49pm UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/check-please/38217/1 "2003-12-19T15:49:19Z")

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Please  
[Millad Studio](http://www.unknowndesigns.net/millad/)

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**Author:** ![system](https://canada1.discourse-cdn.com/flex011/uploads/kirupa/original/3X/6/2/621e5c11736f46532526e61be85940af4230f3e5.png) [@system](https://forum.kirupa.com/u/system)\
**Post date:** [December 21, 2003, 3:59am UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/check-please/38217/2 "2003-12-21T03:59:39Z")

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change the outer-glow on the text on your buttons to a different color, not the default yellow it doesnt match the site. but i liked it

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**Author:** ![system](https://canada1.discourse-cdn.com/flex011/uploads/kirupa/original/3X/6/2/621e5c11736f46532526e61be85940af4230f3e5.png) [@system](https://forum.kirupa.com/u/system)\
**Post date:** [December 22, 2003, 4:02am UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/check-please/38217/3 "2003-12-22T04:02:22Z")

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well, i wont bother repeating whats been said already…

dont worry, i totally got shot down by the maniacs on flashkit for my spelling too… i like to take “creative licensing” with my words… (ooh i bet i slaughtered “licensing”)

aside from whats been side, i really think u should tone done some of the bg blurs… i like that ur using the “grunge” style, but your site still seems too crisp. or something. its good though…

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**Author:** ![system](https://canada1.discourse-cdn.com/flex011/uploads/kirupa/original/3X/6/2/621e5c11736f46532526e61be85940af4230f3e5.png) [@system](https://forum.kirupa.com/u/system)\
**Post date:** [December 22, 2003, 4:13am UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/check-please/38217/4 "2003-12-22T04:13:18Z")

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On your splash page, take our “Awards” until you have awards. It looks real tacky.

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**Author:** ![system](https://canada1.discourse-cdn.com/flex011/uploads/kirupa/original/3X/6/2/621e5c11736f46532526e61be85940af4230f3e5.png) [@system](https://forum.kirupa.com/u/system)\
**Post date:** [December 22, 2003, 10:30am UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/check-please/38217/5 "2003-12-22T10:30:47Z")

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Really like it ! millad…  
good good work keep goinnn’

The only thing i’ve just notice is that ur “hover grey” nav buttons could be better with a light bevel effect.

But that’s nothing compare to ur job done.  
Great use of blur. nice pics and font.

just great

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**Author:** ![system](https://canada1.discourse-cdn.com/flex011/uploads/kirupa/original/3X/6/2/621e5c11736f46532526e61be85940af4230f3e5.png) [@system](https://forum.kirupa.com/u/system)\
**Post date:** [December 24, 2003, 11:55pm UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/check-please/38217/6 "2003-12-24T23:55:04Z")

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too blurry!

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**Author:** ![system](https://canada1.discourse-cdn.com/flex011/uploads/kirupa/original/3X/6/2/621e5c11736f46532526e61be85940af4230f3e5.png) [@system](https://forum.kirupa.com/u/system)\
**Post date:** [December 25, 2003, 5:01am UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/check-please/38217/7 "2003-12-25T05:01:47Z")

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The only thing i really see to improve on is the body text. Lighten the blur/glow a little, and try to stay consistant with your fonts (italiacs/bolds count too). And i dont really see why you need a white border, it separates the background a little too much from the main site. and get some more in the portfolio section, your websites were nice, but i’d love to see some of your graphic work too.:drool: