# Check this and tell me **URL:** \ **Category:** design\ **Created:** [August 12, 2003, 3:03pm UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/check-this-and-tell-me/28314 "2003-08-12T15:03:16Z")\ **Posts on this page:** 6\ **Page:** 1
**Author:** ![delpeboo](https://avatars.discourse-cdn.com/v4/letter/d/d26b3c/32.png) [@delpeboo](https://forum.kirupa.com/u/delpeboo)\ **Post date:** [August 12, 2003, 3:03pm UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/check-this-and-tell-me/28314/1 "2003-08-12T15:03:16Z")
Hi there ! I wish things doing good for all of you !!! check this website : [http://www.hiphopfactory.com](http://www.hiphopfactory.com) I want Opinion, Suggestions, and Critics… don’t hesitate…!!! ---
**Author:** ![system](https://canada1.discourse-cdn.com/flex011/uploads/kirupa/original/3X/6/2/621e5c11736f46532526e61be85940af4230f3e5.png) [@system](https://forum.kirupa.com/u/system)\ **Post date:** [August 12, 2003, 3:08pm UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/check-this-and-tell-me/28314/2 "2003-08-12T15:08:25Z")
i like the layout, but i think you should use a smaller font or a whole different font altogether, and maybe make the black background a little less powerful by filling in some of the orange cells(?) with a gray or some other color. but thats all i can see! good job! ---
**Author:** ![system](https://canada1.discourse-cdn.com/flex011/uploads/kirupa/original/3X/6/2/621e5c11736f46532526e61be85940af4230f3e5.png) [@system](https://forum.kirupa.com/u/system)\ **Post date:** [August 12, 2003, 7:30pm UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/check-this-and-tell-me/28314/3 "2003-08-12T19:30:30Z")
I like the orange on top menu, I dont like the fact u put 5 different colors for ur menu, that button font should be bigger, introduction text in the midlle its a bit big, why italic? better font, try looking for more like hip hop font, or rap type faces take a rap magazine, and check the fonts they have, because in those magazines u could find so much cool ideas and inspirations regarding how rap people like to present them self, always BIG $ and gold colors, not many of them use black, maybe 2pac on his cd covers…but keep this in mind…big money, cool lifestyle, dogs, power, street, hood…and always HOT LOOKING CHICKS!!! good start peace ---
**Author:** ![system](https://canada1.discourse-cdn.com/flex011/uploads/kirupa/original/3X/6/2/621e5c11736f46532526e61be85940af4230f3e5.png) [@system](https://forum.kirupa.com/u/system)\ **Post date:** [August 12, 2003, 8:06pm UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/check-this-and-tell-me/28314/4 "2003-08-12T20:06:35Z")
- faster loading (picture’s wors qualty) - change the submit button - after clicking on the news button all page’s are not here - Also on that page the sound keeps starting over and over. ---
**Author:** ![system](https://canada1.discourse-cdn.com/flex011/uploads/kirupa/original/3X/6/2/621e5c11736f46532526e61be85940af4230f3e5.png) [@system](https://forum.kirupa.com/u/system)\ **Post date:** [August 14, 2003, 2:19pm UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/check-this-and-tell-me/28314/5 "2003-08-14T14:19:11Z")
to many differnt colors for my taste. and too many lines. try looking at [http://www.50cent.com/](http://www.50cent.com/). (sorry its like the only rap person i know lol) look for a more hip hop theme i guess. i do like the organge menu all the way up top. try to incoporate that into all of the windows. that could make it look better. 🙂 ---
**Author:** ![system](https://canada1.discourse-cdn.com/flex011/uploads/kirupa/original/3X/6/2/621e5c11736f46532526e61be85940af4230f3e5.png) [@system](https://forum.kirupa.com/u/system)\ **Post date:** [August 14, 2003, 5:53pm UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/check-this-and-tell-me/28314/6 "2003-08-14T17:53:04Z")
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