# Comments plz

**URL:** <https://forum.kirupa.com/t/comments-plz/6090>\
**Category:** design\
**Created:** [September 29, 2002, 1:03pm UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/comments-plz/6090 "2002-09-29T13:03:42Z")\
**Posts on this page:** 7\
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**Author:** ![hsadan](https://avatars.discourse-cdn.com/v4/letter/h/7bcc69/32.png) [@hsadan](https://forum.kirupa.com/u/hsadan)\
**Post date:** [September 29, 2002, 1:03pm UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/comments-plz/6090/1 "2002-09-29T13:03:42Z")

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here’s one of my first…so help me improve on it =)

[HSA Dan 2002](http://geocities.com/hsadan2001/hello.html)

i think the words in the upper left hand corner are kinda extra…any idea how i can blend it in, should i get rid of it, or is it completely ok?

suggestions, critism, watever, pls

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**Author:** ![system](https://canada1.discourse-cdn.com/flex011/uploads/kirupa/original/3X/6/2/621e5c11736f46532526e61be85940af4230f3e5.png) [@system](https://forum.kirupa.com/u/system)\
**Post date:** [September 29, 2002, 9:43pm UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/comments-plz/6090/2 "2002-09-29T21:43:32Z")

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I think the words look kinda weird on a heavy grid like that, and the flare in the background looks a little grittish.

Should have the same sharpness as the rest of the image…

oh, and add some color! unless it’s the black&white look you’re after 😛

neat…! 🙂 Good for a first try…!

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**Author:** ![system](https://canada1.discourse-cdn.com/flex011/uploads/kirupa/original/3X/6/2/621e5c11736f46532526e61be85940af4230f3e5.png) [@system](https://forum.kirupa.com/u/system)\
**Post date:** [September 30, 2002, 11:55am UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/comments-plz/6090/3 "2002-09-30T11:55:05Z")

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haha…but i can’t seem to find a suitable color scheme 😛

um…looks gritty? u talking about the ‘rays’, rite? i made it by drawing the lines and then radial blurring it…i used the good quality, maybe i should use the best quality next time 🙂

i have made some changes, including removing the words in the upperleft…but i can’t change the flare cos i don’t want to do it again 😏 (took quite awhile ;))

thx for your comments…  
\*(Anyone else? =) ) \*

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**Author:** ![system](https://canada1.discourse-cdn.com/flex011/uploads/kirupa/original/3X/6/2/621e5c11736f46532526e61be85940af4230f3e5.png) [@system](https://forum.kirupa.com/u/system)\
**Post date:** [September 30, 2002, 12:49pm UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/comments-plz/6090/4 "2002-09-30T12:49:21Z")

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oki, but u could also go for the built in flare filter…

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**Author:** ![system](https://canada1.discourse-cdn.com/flex011/uploads/kirupa/original/3X/6/2/621e5c11736f46532526e61be85940af4230f3e5.png) [@system](https://forum.kirupa.com/u/system)\
**Post date:** [September 30, 2002, 2:25pm UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/comments-plz/6090/5 "2002-09-30T14:25:27Z")

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that wouldn’t be too original, would it? 😉

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**Author:** ![system](https://canada1.discourse-cdn.com/flex011/uploads/kirupa/original/3X/6/2/621e5c11736f46532526e61be85940af4230f3e5.png) [@system](https://forum.kirupa.com/u/system)\
**Post date:** [September 30, 2002, 2:43pm UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/comments-plz/6090/6 "2002-09-30T14:43:45Z")

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Heck no… it’s there for a reason…

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**Author:** ![system](https://canada1.discourse-cdn.com/flex011/uploads/kirupa/original/3X/6/2/621e5c11736f46532526e61be85940af4230f3e5.png) [@system](https://forum.kirupa.com/u/system)\
**Post date:** [October 1, 2002, 8:36am UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/comments-plz/6090/7 "2002-10-01T08:36:14Z")

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lol ok…