# Comments? **URL:** \ **Category:** design\ **Created:** [October 20, 2002, 9:54pm UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/comments/6955 "2002-10-20T21:54:34Z")\ **Posts on this page:** 20\ **Page:** 1
**Author:** ![DyersEve](https://avatars.discourse-cdn.com/v4/letter/d/8797f3/32.png) [@DyersEve](https://forum.kirupa.com/u/DyersEve)\ **Post date:** [October 20, 2002, 9:54pm UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/comments/6955/1 "2002-10-20T21:54:34Z")
Well this is my first attempt at a picture of this kind, so go ahead rip into it and tell me what to start improving on. ![](http://teamnerd.tripod.com/random/images.txt) ---
**Author:** ![system](https://canada1.discourse-cdn.com/flex011/uploads/kirupa/original/3X/6/2/621e5c11736f46532526e61be85940af4230f3e5.png) [@system](https://forum.kirupa.com/u/system)\ **Post date:** [October 21, 2002, 1:44am UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/comments/6955/2 "2002-10-21T01:44:07Z")
not bad at all, but the text sucks :evil: ---
**Author:** ![system](https://canada1.discourse-cdn.com/flex011/uploads/kirupa/original/3X/6/2/621e5c11736f46532526e61be85940af4230f3e5.png) [@system](https://forum.kirupa.com/u/system)\ **Post date:** [October 21, 2002, 2:02am UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/comments/6955/3 "2002-10-21T02:02:01Z")
thnx but do you mean what the text says or the font/format/position of it? ---
**Author:** ![system](https://canada1.discourse-cdn.com/flex011/uploads/kirupa/original/3X/6/2/621e5c11736f46532526e61be85940af4230f3e5.png) [@system](https://forum.kirupa.com/u/system)\ **Post date:** [October 21, 2002, 2:09am UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/comments/6955/4 "2002-10-21T02:09:08Z")
That is very nice, but as mdipi said, that center text is way out of place. It is just… there… the font, size and everything just doesn’t fit. If you make that text grungier and change the font it should look better. ---
**Author:** ![system](https://canada1.discourse-cdn.com/flex011/uploads/kirupa/original/3X/6/2/621e5c11736f46532526e61be85940af4230f3e5.png) [@system](https://forum.kirupa.com/u/system)\ **Post date:** [October 21, 2002, 5:05am UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/comments/6955/5 "2002-10-21T05:05:10Z")
Alright i did a little work on the picture, and im not sure if it is better or worse so tell me what you guys think. ![](http://teamnerd.tripod.com/random/images2.txt) ---
**Author:** ![system](https://canada1.discourse-cdn.com/flex011/uploads/kirupa/original/3X/6/2/621e5c11736f46532526e61be85940af4230f3e5.png) [@system](https://forum.kirupa.com/u/system)\ **Post date:** [October 21, 2002, 5:08am UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/comments/6955/6 "2002-10-21T05:08:47Z")
It is much better now 🙂 Could still use some more around the center, there are a lot of large blank spaces. This is just a suggestion though. ---
**Author:** ![system](https://canada1.discourse-cdn.com/flex011/uploads/kirupa/original/3X/6/2/621e5c11736f46532526e61be85940af4230f3e5.png) [@system](https://forum.kirupa.com/u/system)\ **Post date:** [October 21, 2002, 5:15am UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/comments/6955/7 "2002-10-21T05:15:25Z")
I actually like the negative space… but I would like to see the text off center, maybe to the southeast… IMHO Rev:elderly: ---
**Author:** ![system](https://canada1.discourse-cdn.com/flex011/uploads/kirupa/original/3X/6/2/621e5c11736f46532526e61be85940af4230f3e5.png) [@system](https://forum.kirupa.com/u/system)\ **Post date:** [October 21, 2002, 5:16am UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/comments/6955/8 "2002-10-21T05:16:26Z")
I actually like it the way it is… 🙂 ---
**Author:** ![system](https://canada1.discourse-cdn.com/flex011/uploads/kirupa/original/3X/6/2/621e5c11736f46532526e61be85940af4230f3e5.png) [@system](https://forum.kirupa.com/u/system)\ **Post date:** [October 21, 2002, 5:19am UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/comments/6955/9 "2002-10-21T05:19:47Z")
I actually agree with rev now… I think the location of the text is what is making it look like there are too many empty spaces… where if you offset the text it will be one big open space instead of a bunch of big ones. I think that will make it look better. ---
**Author:** ![system](https://canada1.discourse-cdn.com/flex011/uploads/kirupa/original/3X/6/2/621e5c11736f46532526e61be85940af4230f3e5.png) [@system](https://forum.kirupa.com/u/system)\ **Post date:** [October 21, 2002, 5:28am UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/comments/6955/10 "2002-10-21T05:28:33Z")
Alright…something like this? ![](http://teamnerd.tripod.com/random/images3.txt) ---
**Author:** ![system](https://canada1.discourse-cdn.com/flex011/uploads/kirupa/original/3X/6/2/621e5c11736f46532526e61be85940af4230f3e5.png) [@system](https://forum.kirupa.com/u/system)\ **Post date:** [October 21, 2002, 5:32am UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/comments/6955/11 "2002-10-21T05:32:10Z")
I was thinking more of tucked in between the leaves and the symbols in the lower right hand corner (but sticking out a bit so it is all showing and not convered by the leaves and symbols). It is your image though, so put it wherever you want. Suggestion: don’t keep it there (I am such a hypocrite sometimes 😛 ) ---
**Author:** ![system](https://canada1.discourse-cdn.com/flex011/uploads/kirupa/original/3X/6/2/621e5c11736f46532526e61be85940af4230f3e5.png) [@system](https://forum.kirupa.com/u/system)\ **Post date:** [October 21, 2002, 5:33am UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/comments/6955/12 "2002-10-21T05:33:16Z")
You are getting there, but I was thinking South and East (to the right)… 😛 here is a link to a great explaination of the “rule of 3rds” [http://www.itecksu.org/courses/DesVisWeb/pages/rulethirds.htm](http://www.itecksu.org/courses/DesVisWeb/pages/rulethirds.htm) Rev:elderly: ---
**Author:** ![system](https://canada1.discourse-cdn.com/flex011/uploads/kirupa/original/3X/6/2/621e5c11736f46532526e61be85940af4230f3e5.png) [@system](https://forum.kirupa.com/u/system)\ **Post date:** [October 21, 2002, 5:35am UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/comments/6955/13 "2002-10-21T05:35:43Z")
Wow, very interesting. I have never heard of that before. Well where I was thinking falls in those rules, according to that grid, it was #2. Like I said though, put it where you want… don’t mind me…just blurting stuff out. ---
**Author:** ![system](https://canada1.discourse-cdn.com/flex011/uploads/kirupa/original/3X/6/2/621e5c11736f46532526e61be85940af4230f3e5.png) [@system](https://forum.kirupa.com/u/system)\ **Post date:** [October 21, 2002, 5:36am UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/comments/6955/14 "2002-10-21T05:36:56Z")
Well guess what…I changed it to almost exactly what you are describing the second after i made that last post, I think it looks much better than when i first started out…thanks a lot everyone. 🙂 ![](http://teamnerd.tripod.com/random/images4.txt) ---
**Author:** ![system](https://canada1.discourse-cdn.com/flex011/uploads/kirupa/original/3X/6/2/621e5c11736f46532526e61be85940af4230f3e5.png) [@system](https://forum.kirupa.com/u/system)\ **Post date:** [October 21, 2002, 5:39am UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/comments/6955/15 "2002-10-21T05:39:11Z")
W00t!!! I love it =) ---
**Author:** ![system](https://canada1.discourse-cdn.com/flex011/uploads/kirupa/original/3X/6/2/621e5c11736f46532526e61be85940af4230f3e5.png) [@system](https://forum.kirupa.com/u/system)\ **Post date:** [October 21, 2002, 5:42am UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/comments/6955/16 "2002-10-21T05:42:02Z")
I agree ---
**Author:** ![system](https://canada1.discourse-cdn.com/flex011/uploads/kirupa/original/3X/6/2/621e5c11736f46532526e61be85940af4230f3e5.png) [@system](https://forum.kirupa.com/u/system)\ **Post date:** [October 21, 2002, 5:44am UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/comments/6955/17 "2002-10-21T05:44:02Z")
thats what I mean… nice… 😛 😛 😛 😛 I love negative space… :sleep: Rev:elderly: ---
**Author:** ![system](https://canada1.discourse-cdn.com/flex011/uploads/kirupa/original/3X/6/2/621e5c11736f46532526e61be85940af4230f3e5.png) [@system](https://forum.kirupa.com/u/system)\ **Post date:** [October 21, 2002, 5:47am UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/comments/6955/18 "2002-10-21T05:47:39Z")
See, rev you like my idea 😛 Bow to the untrained designer 😛 =) ---
**Author:** ![system](https://canada1.discourse-cdn.com/flex011/uploads/kirupa/original/3X/6/2/621e5c11736f46532526e61be85940af4230f3e5.png) [@system](https://forum.kirupa.com/u/system)\ **Post date:** [October 21, 2002, 5:50am UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/comments/6955/19 "2002-10-21T05:50:07Z")
I bow to all ya’ll… 🙂 You guys make my stuff look like a 3rd grader just threw up… 😛 ::bows, realizing he has 2 different colored socks on:: Rev:elderly: ---
**Author:** ![system](https://canada1.discourse-cdn.com/flex011/uploads/kirupa/original/3X/6/2/621e5c11736f46532526e61be85940af4230f3e5.png) [@system](https://forum.kirupa.com/u/system)\ **Post date:** [October 21, 2002, 5:51am UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/comments/6955/20 "2002-10-21T05:51:52Z")
lol. Yeah I know your just kidding about that 3rd grader stuff mr. Iworkedforeidosandnike 😛 [Next page](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/comments/6955.md?page=2)