# Composition off?

**URL:** <https://forum.kirupa.com/t/composition-off/254239>\
**Category:** Uncategorized\
**Created:** [March 10, 2008, 3:43am UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/composition-off/254239 "2008-03-10T03:43:16Z")\
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**Author:** ![matthewstokeley](https://avatars.discourse-cdn.com/v4/letter/m/4af34b/32.png) [@matthewstokeley](https://forum.kirupa.com/u/matthewstokeley)\
**Post date:** [March 10, 2008, 3:43am UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/composition-off/254239/1 "2008-03-10T03:43:16Z")

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hey all,

i was hoping some people would be able to give their opinion of this mockup - does the balance of the design look off? any and all comments and criticisms are welcome! thanks so much.

![](http://www.whatupbra.org/mockup.jpg)