# Corban Nichols

**URL:** <https://forum.kirupa.com/t/corban-nichols/60645>\
**Category:** design\
**Created:** [August 11, 2004, 10:16am UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/corban-nichols/60645 "2004-08-11T10:16:12Z")\
**Posts on this page:** 4\
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**Author:** ![Danno](https://avatars.discourse-cdn.com/v4/letter/d/e47c2d/32.png) [@Danno](https://forum.kirupa.com/u/Danno)\
**Post date:** [August 11, 2004, 10:16am UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/corban-nichols/60645/1 "2004-08-11T10:16:12Z")

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[http://www.corbannichols.com](http://www.corbannichols.com)

This is just the splash as of yet, but some feedback of what you think would be great.

Thanks,  
Danno~

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**Author:** ![system](https://canada1.discourse-cdn.com/flex011/uploads/kirupa/original/3X/6/2/621e5c11736f46532526e61be85940af4230f3e5.png) [@system](https://forum.kirupa.com/u/system)\
**Post date:** [August 11, 2004, 10:45am UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/corban-nichols/60645/2 "2004-08-11T10:45:55Z")

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I like the idea of the tree pre-loader. a bit more to go within the animation of leaves falling (another 5 minutes will make it look so much better.) A simplistic format but the colour scheme could do with a re-think. Another 30 mins on the graphics and it wil be sorted.

Scott 🙂

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**Author:** ![system](https://canada1.discourse-cdn.com/flex011/uploads/kirupa/original/3X/6/2/621e5c11736f46532526e61be85940af4230f3e5.png) [@system](https://forum.kirupa.com/u/system)\
**Post date:** [August 11, 2004, 1:27pm UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/corban-nichols/60645/3 "2004-08-11T13:27:48Z")

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The loader looked sweet. It was smooth and stylish! I could see what they\_played\_tri was saying about the leaves, that could certainly seal the deal with that. The splash page could possibly use a bit of work. The book was a little overdone with the crinkled up paper look. It almost seemed unnatural. Try to play with the fonts sizes and colors too. Once again, it looks almost unnatural. With a little playing with it I’m shure it could look quite awesome! Keep up the good work, I would like to see what comes of this!

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**Author:** ![system](https://canada1.discourse-cdn.com/flex011/uploads/kirupa/original/3X/6/2/621e5c11736f46532526e61be85940af4230f3e5.png) [@system](https://forum.kirupa.com/u/system)\
**Post date:** [August 11, 2004, 2:48pm UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/corban-nichols/60645/4 "2004-08-11T14:48:42Z")

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good start

lower the brightness on those book pages, its too harsh, and also the smudge and blur effects on the edges are a bit too much, i like the shape of the book.

and was it me or…on your preloader i saw it unmask the tree, then this little portion on the lower right just “appeared” instead of the smooth mask i had been seeing - maybe it was my eyes this morning.