# Crit: Band artwork

**URL:** <https://forum.kirupa.com/t/crit-band-artwork/288613>\
**Category:** design\
**Created:** [May 18, 2009, 10:09pm UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/crit-band-artwork/288613 "2009-05-18T22:09:00Z")\
**Posts on this page:** 1\
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**Author:** ![Iamthejuggler](https://avatars.discourse-cdn.com/v4/letter/i/ecc23a/32.png) [@Iamthejuggler](https://forum.kirupa.com/u/Iamthejuggler)\
**Post date:** [May 18, 2009, 10:09pm UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/crit-band-artwork/288613/1 "2009-05-18T22:09:00Z")

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This is a design i have just done for a friends band’s leaflet artwork. Yes, the name “Loyalty Point” is awful, but what do you think of the design?

All crits much appreciated.

![](http://forum.kirupa.com/uploads/kirupa/5407/c17b93b13a1f45f2.jpg)

cheers dudes and dudettes.