# Crit for website mock-up

**URL:** <https://forum.kirupa.com/t/crit-for-website-mock-up/232869>\
**Category:** Uncategorized\
**Created:** [July 18, 2007, 12:27pm UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/crit-for-website-mock-up/232869 "2007-07-18T12:27:31Z")\
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**Author:** ![sdonline](https://avatars.discourse-cdn.com/v4/letter/s/eb8c5e/32.png) [@sdonline](https://forum.kirupa.com/u/sdonline)\
**Post date:** [July 18, 2007, 12:27pm UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/crit-for-website-mock-up/232869/1 "2007-07-18T12:27:31Z")

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Here is a site I am working on, this is the current mock up, just want some crit it feels like its missing something, its not quite there, but i dont know what, so feed back would be great so I can refine it, I just want it to be better so let me know what you think.

[www.stratospheredesign.com/work/bayside/index.html](http://www.stratospheredesign.com/work/bayside/index.html)

ps body font is currently default : )
