# Critical V1 - critique

**URL:** https://forum.kirupa.com/t/critical-v1-critique/152636
**Category:** design
**Created:** [June 26, 2005, 10:00am UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/critical-v1-critique/152636 "2005-06-26T10:00:00Z")
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### Author: ![pizzaguy234](https://avatars.discourse-cdn.com/v4/letter/p/a587f6/32.png) [@pizzaguy234](https://forum.kirupa.com/u/pizzaguy234)
#### Post date: [June 26, 2005, 10:00am UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/critical-v1-critique/152636/1 "2005-06-26T10:00:00Z")

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Well, now i have finished school, finally i have some time to work on my portfolio site. I want to get it right, so i look to you guys to tell me if you like it, or if not then where i am going wrong, its only an image at the moment, want to get it good before i start it in flash. Thanks in advance. Andy.

![](http://www.criticalwebdesign.co.uk/critical_V1_layout1.jpg)