# Critics Please - New Logo **URL:** \ **Category:** design\ **Created:** [June 7, 2008, 10:03pm UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/critics-please-new-logo/262618 "2008-06-07T22:03:37Z")\ **Posts on this page:** 20\ **Page:** 1
**Author:** ![Andy92](https://yyz1.discourse-cdn.com/flex011/user_avatar/forum.kirupa.com/andy92/32/1891_2.png) [@Andy92](https://forum.kirupa.com/u/Andy92)\ **Post date:** [June 7, 2008, 10:03pm UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/critics-please-new-logo/262618/1 "2008-06-07T22:03:37Z")
Hey, I have been trying to design a new [Kedoa.com](http://Kedoa.com) logo for a long time now. I have played around with a few ideas, and here are some of them. Please feel free to give me ways on how to improve it. By the way I am going with the theme of design resources / favorite websites… [CENTER] ![](http://i25.tinypic.com/33a5i6c.png) [/CENTER] ---
**Author:** ![shane\_c](https://avatars.discourse-cdn.com/v4/letter/s/3be4f8/32.png) [@shane\_c](https://forum.kirupa.com/u/shane_c)\ **Post date:** [June 7, 2008, 10:12pm UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/critics-please-new-logo/262618/2 "2008-06-07T22:12:04Z")
Out of the three, I think the middle one is the most attractive… But the bottom one is the most readable. ---
**Author:** ![snickelfritz](https://avatars.discourse-cdn.com/v4/letter/s/7ea924/32.png) [@snickelfritz](https://forum.kirupa.com/u/snickelfritz)\ **Post date:** [June 7, 2008, 10:53pm UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/critics-please-new-logo/262618/3 "2008-06-07T22:53:42Z")
I like number 3. The heart appears sympathetic to the letterforms. The heart could be simpler and more sympathetic in shape. (the compound curves in the lower part of heart shape are what I’m referring to) Not sure if the “e” and tail on the “K” are working with this design. ---
**Author:** ![system](https://canada1.discourse-cdn.com/flex011/uploads/kirupa/original/3X/6/2/621e5c11736f46532526e61be85940af4230f3e5.png) [@system](https://forum.kirupa.com/u/system)\ **Post date:** [June 8, 2008, 12:21am UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/critics-please-new-logo/262618/4 "2008-06-08T00:21:18Z")
Third one kicks butt. Good job! ---
**Author:** ![Anogar](https://avatars.discourse-cdn.com/v4/letter/a/ed655f/32.png) [@Anogar](https://forum.kirupa.com/u/Anogar)\ **Post date:** [June 8, 2008, 12:22am UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/critics-please-new-logo/262618/5 "2008-06-08T00:22:13Z")
Of those, I like #3. It’s more readable, and it fits better with the rest of the font. I think you could make the heart a tad bigger in #3. I don’t really like the ‘e’, it just seems odd. Looks pretty okay though, no big complaints from me. :thumb: ---
**Author:** ![anon1712571](https://avatars.discourse-cdn.com/v4/letter/a/9dc877/32.png) [@anon1712571](https://forum.kirupa.com/u/anon1712571)\ **Post date:** [June 8, 2008, 2:13am UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/critics-please-new-logo/262618/6 "2008-06-08T02:13:42Z")
Fix the e- it doesn’t read well.You need more interaction between forms and flow! ---
**Author:** ![nobody](https://avatars.discourse-cdn.com/v4/letter/n/94ad74/32.png) [@nobody](https://forum.kirupa.com/u/nobody)\ **Post date:** [June 8, 2008, 2:25am UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/critics-please-new-logo/262618/7 "2008-06-08T02:25:49Z")
Really poor kerning and the face is really stiff. ---
**Author:** ![system](https://canada1.discourse-cdn.com/flex011/uploads/kirupa/original/3X/6/2/621e5c11736f46532526e61be85940af4230f3e5.png) [@system](https://forum.kirupa.com/u/system)\ **Post date:** [June 8, 2008, 3:37am UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/critics-please-new-logo/262618/8 "2008-06-08T03:37:44Z")
^ Now that I examine it, you’re completely right. Shame on me. ---
**Author:** ![anon1712571](https://avatars.discourse-cdn.com/v4/letter/a/9dc877/32.png) [@anon1712571](https://forum.kirupa.com/u/anon1712571)\ **Post date:** [June 8, 2008, 4:02am UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/critics-please-new-logo/262618/9 "2008-06-08T04:02:38Z")
Do you even know what that is?^ ---
**Author:** ![system](https://canada1.discourse-cdn.com/flex011/uploads/kirupa/original/3X/6/2/621e5c11736f46532526e61be85940af4230f3e5.png) [@system](https://forum.kirupa.com/u/system)\ **Post date:** [June 8, 2008, 4:05am UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/critics-please-new-logo/262618/10 "2008-06-08T04:05:02Z")
^ What, kerning and face? Yes. I use them all the time in Photoshop. Why? ---
**Author:** ![anon1712571](https://avatars.discourse-cdn.com/v4/letter/a/9dc877/32.png) [@anon1712571](https://forum.kirupa.com/u/anon1712571)\ **Post date:** [June 8, 2008, 4:07am UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/critics-please-new-logo/262618/11 "2008-06-08T04:07:33Z")
Using them, and knowing what looks good are two different things 😉 ---
**Author:** ![system](https://canada1.discourse-cdn.com/flex011/uploads/kirupa/original/3X/6/2/621e5c11736f46532526e61be85940af4230f3e5.png) [@system](https://forum.kirupa.com/u/system)\ **Post date:** [June 8, 2008, 4:54am UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/critics-please-new-logo/262618/12 "2008-06-08T04:54:30Z")
^Too true…I’ve experimented enough to know what looks good though. ---
**Author:** ![FlashPirateYarr](https://avatars.discourse-cdn.com/v4/letter/f/f08c70/32.png) [@FlashPirateYarr](https://forum.kirupa.com/u/FlashPirateYarr)\ **Post date:** [June 8, 2008, 5:27am UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/critics-please-new-logo/262618/13 "2008-06-08T05:27:11Z")
Why the heart? Wouldn’t you rather use a symbol that’s relevant to your content? ---
**Author:** ![TheCanadian](https://avatars.discourse-cdn.com/v4/letter/t/67e7ee/32.png) [@TheCanadian](https://forum.kirupa.com/u/TheCanadian)\ **Post date:** [June 8, 2008, 6:26am UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/critics-please-new-logo/262618/14 "2008-06-08T06:26:12Z")
Yeah it looks liek a dating service. ---
**Author:** ![anon1712571](https://avatars.discourse-cdn.com/v4/letter/a/9dc877/32.png) [@anon1712571](https://forum.kirupa.com/u/anon1712571)\ **Post date:** [June 8, 2008, 6:27am UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/critics-please-new-logo/262618/15 "2008-06-08T06:27:20Z")
> [@motionman95;2338796](#): > > ^Too true…I’ve experimented enough to know what looks good though. > **[kirupaForum](https://forum.kirupa.com)** > > Got a web design/development question or just want to hang out with the most awesome people on the planet? Drop on in! clearly. ---
**Author:** ![system](https://canada1.discourse-cdn.com/flex011/uploads/kirupa/original/3X/6/2/621e5c11736f46532526e61be85940af4230f3e5.png) [@system](https://forum.kirupa.com/u/system)\ **Post date:** [June 8, 2008, 6:30am UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/critics-please-new-logo/262618/16 "2008-06-08T06:30:51Z")
^ Yep. That’s a great example. Glad you posted that. Good job! ---
**Author:** ![anon1712571](https://avatars.discourse-cdn.com/v4/letter/a/9dc877/32.png) [@anon1712571](https://forum.kirupa.com/u/anon1712571)\ **Post date:** [June 8, 2008, 6:38am UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/critics-please-new-logo/262618/17 "2008-06-08T06:38:40Z")
I am NEVER sarcastic. ---
**Author:** ![system](https://canada1.discourse-cdn.com/flex011/uploads/kirupa/original/3X/6/2/621e5c11736f46532526e61be85940af4230f3e5.png) [@system](https://forum.kirupa.com/u/system)\ **Post date:** [June 8, 2008, 6:41am UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/critics-please-new-logo/262618/18 "2008-06-08T06:41:52Z")
I know. That’s why I believed you. [COLOR=Silver] This is fun.[/COLOR] ---
**Author:** ![sekasi](https://avatars.discourse-cdn.com/v4/letter/s/5f8ce5/32.png) [@sekasi](https://forum.kirupa.com/u/sekasi)\ **Post date:** [June 8, 2008, 6:45am UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/critics-please-new-logo/262618/19 "2008-06-08T06:45:27Z")
Stop derailing threads … regarding OP, not really feeling those. The first one is most visually appealing to me, but not quite readable :X ---
**Author:** ![anon1712571](https://avatars.discourse-cdn.com/v4/letter/a/9dc877/32.png) [@anon1712571](https://forum.kirupa.com/u/anon1712571)\ **Post date:** [June 8, 2008, 6:47am UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/critics-please-new-logo/262618/20 "2008-06-08T06:47:11Z")
[quote=motionman95;2338837]I know. That’s why I believed you. [COLOR=Silver] This is fun.[/COLOR][/quote] ![](http://forum.kirupa.com/uploads/kirupa/6945/1042ad3121c81698.jpg) Back on topic- I think a glyph would help inspire something typographical. [Next page](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/critics-please-new-logo/262618.md?page=2)