# Critique: First Flash Site

**URL:** <https://forum.kirupa.com/t/critique-first-flash-site/229853>\
**Category:** design\
**Created:** [June 20, 2007, 5:06pm UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/critique-first-flash-site/229853 "2007-06-20T17:06:46Z")\
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**Author:** ![sandeur](https://avatars.discourse-cdn.com/v4/letter/s/d78d45/32.png) [@sandeur](https://forum.kirupa.com/u/sandeur)\
**Post date:** [June 20, 2007, 5:06pm UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/critique-first-flash-site/229853/1 "2007-06-20T17:06:46Z")

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Heya folks!

I’ve been playing around with Flash 8 for a while, mainly just copying scripts from Kirupa, changing them a little to see what happens in an attempt to understand actionscript.

This is my first actual attempt at a site in Flash, and I’d like to know what you guys think.

It’s for a friend of mine, who has a one-woman company that does decorative painting. (two links don’t work yet)

The site’s in Dutch, if you were wondering.

Things I can’t change:

- The hummingbird logo
- The Monotype Corsiva font
- I had to use colours around that colour range

Anyway, here it is:

[Click](http://www.decoratiefschilderwerk.nl/test/index.html)

Constructive critique on design and development greatly appreciated!