# Critique improves games

**URL:** https://forum.kirupa.com/t/critique-improves-games/133875
**Category:** Uncategorized
**Created:** [January 12, 2005, 5:29pm UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/critique-improves-games/133875 "2005-01-12T17:29:20Z")
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### Author: ![e\_sarbak](https://avatars.discourse-cdn.com/v4/letter/e/eb9ed0/32.png) [@e\_sarbak](https://forum.kirupa.com/u/e_sarbak)
#### Post date: [January 12, 2005, 5:29pm UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/critique-improves-games/133875/1 "2005-01-12T17:29:20Z")

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Here is my game…  
[http://escc.sitemynet.com/uzaymuzay\_1\_.swf[url=“http://escc.sitemynet.com/uzaymuzay\_1\_.swf”]](http://escc.sitemynet.com/uzaymuzay_1_.swf%5Burl=%22http://escc.sitemynet.com/uzaymuzay_1_.swf%22%5D)  
I need lots of advises  
Criticise,improve