# Critique intro

**URL:** https://forum.kirupa.com/t/critique-intro/92291
**Category:** Uncategorized
**Created:** [October 15, 2003, 3:00pm UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/critique-intro/92291 "2003-10-15T15:00:37Z")
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### Author: ![Oxbownick](https://avatars.discourse-cdn.com/v4/letter/o/ebca7d/32.png) [@Oxbownick](https://forum.kirupa.com/u/Oxbownick)
#### Post date: [October 15, 2003, 3:00pm UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/critique-intro/92291/1 "2003-10-15T15:00:37Z")

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its not complete but i though i get some feedback on the sofar

intro for my youth group.