# Critique layout-wise

**URL:** https://forum.kirupa.com/t/critique-layout-wise/75684
**Category:** design
**Created:** [January 11, 2005, 11:19am UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/critique-layout-wise/75684 "2005-01-11T11:19:21Z")
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### Author: ![innoxist](https://avatars.discourse-cdn.com/v4/letter/i/a88e4f/32.png) [@innoxist](https://forum.kirupa.com/u/innoxist)
#### Post date: [January 11, 2005, 11:19am UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/critique-layout-wise/75684/1 "2005-01-11T11:19:21Z")

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I’m doing a site for a club in school, and this is what I’ve got so far. It’s only about 50% done, and preloaders and transitions not in yet, but I wanted to make sure I’m on the right track before I continue and risk scrapping everything. Please give comments!

By the way please don’t mind the index page because I haven’t gotten round to changing that yet, it’s the main swf that needs critiquing.

[DHS Air Rifle Club](http://www.geocities.com/dhsarc)