# Critique - Login Page

**URL:** <https://forum.kirupa.com/t/critique-login-page/183571>\
**Category:** design\
**Created:** [March 28, 2006, 12:37pm UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/critique-login-page/183571 "2006-03-28T12:37:36Z")\
**Posts on this page:** 9\
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**Author:** ![minchu](https://avatars.discourse-cdn.com/v4/letter/m/df788c/32.png) [@minchu](https://forum.kirupa.com/u/minchu)\
**Post date:** [March 28, 2006, 12:37pm UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/critique-login-page/183571/1 "2006-03-28T12:37:36Z")

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Friends,  
Pls check [http://www.teledna.com/test/login.jpg](http://www.teledna.com/test/login.jpg) and let me know your comments. This is a login screen for a SMS based application.  
I’m unable to understand negative in this design, pls suggest me to improve.

Regards,  
Minchu

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**Author:** ![Bokke](https://avatars.discourse-cdn.com/v4/letter/b/5f9b8f/32.png) [@Bokke](https://forum.kirupa.com/u/Bokke)\
**Post date:** [March 28, 2006, 12:44pm UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/critique-login-page/183571/2 "2006-03-28T12:44:58Z")

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Verry cool! I like the blue/white and the brigth colors!  
Only thing is the logo: dont like the glow… does not fit the clean layout.  
So i say get rid of the glow and maybe pimp the logo a bit, couse its a bit ugly.  
I looks like it has past in later…  
No…, wait i just dont like the whole logo… :lol:

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**Author:** ![designapp](https://avatars.discourse-cdn.com/v4/letter/d/d07c76/32.png) [@designapp](https://forum.kirupa.com/u/designapp)\
**Post date:** [March 28, 2006, 5:19pm UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/critique-login-page/183571/3 "2006-03-28T17:19:02Z")

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i like the background… but I think the button don’t blend in with the overall design…

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**Author:** ![JoshuaJonah](https://yyz1.discourse-cdn.com/flex011/user_avatar/forum.kirupa.com/joshuajonah/32/1775_2.png) [@JoshuaJonah](https://forum.kirupa.com/u/JoshuaJonah)\
**Post date:** [March 28, 2006, 5:22pm UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/critique-login-page/183571/4 "2006-03-28T17:22:36Z")

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I think it very clean and fresh, quite appealing for a simple login page. What’s the password?🙂

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**Author:** ![theflash](https://yyz1.discourse-cdn.com/flex011/user_avatar/forum.kirupa.com/theflash/32/1221_2.png) [@theflash](https://forum.kirupa.com/u/theflash)\
**Post date:** [March 28, 2006, 6:13pm UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/critique-login-page/183571/5 "2006-03-28T18:13:30Z")

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looks cool… only problem seems to be with the text color in logiin button… is it disabled ?

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**Author:** ![bwh2](https://avatars.discourse-cdn.com/v4/letter/b/8c91f0/32.png) [@bwh2](https://forum.kirupa.com/u/bwh2)\
**Post date:** [March 28, 2006, 6:43pm UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/critique-login-page/183571/6 "2006-03-28T18:43:16Z")

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some things i would consider changing:

- drop the the glow around the logo.
- add a “forgot your username or password?” link
- change the login button’s text color so something higher contrast. the current color and icon make it look like an RSS feed button
- bold “Login Name” and “Password”

i’m being overly picky though. the functionality, aside from a “forgot username/password” link, seems to be there.

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**Author:** ![minchu](https://avatars.discourse-cdn.com/v4/letter/m/df788c/32.png) [@minchu](https://forum.kirupa.com/u/minchu)\
**Post date:** [March 29, 2006, 12:27pm UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/critique-login-page/183571/7 "2006-03-29T12:27:41Z")

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Dear all,  
Thank you very much for ur kind reply and suggestions, surely I’ll consider all your suggestions and modify it.

Regards,  
Minchu

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**Author:** ![Soudou](https://avatars.discourse-cdn.com/v4/letter/s/c5a1d2/32.png) [@Soudou](https://forum.kirupa.com/u/Soudou)\
**Post date:** [March 29, 2006, 2:42pm UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/critique-login-page/183571/8 "2006-03-29T14:42:49Z")

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Well everything I wanted to say has been said almost 🙂  
It looks really clean and professional, nice work. I like it 😃

I think I can see a faint line running diagonally centerally from left to right on that purple tick icon… (odd)

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**Author:** ![kmria](https://yyz1.discourse-cdn.com/flex011/user_avatar/forum.kirupa.com/kmria/32/2248_2.png) [@kmria](https://forum.kirupa.com/u/kmria)\
**Post date:** [March 30, 2006, 12:03am UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/critique-login-page/183571/9 "2006-03-30T00:03:15Z")

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On higher resolution your screen looks this…I thought let me just make you aware with it…  
 ![](http://c6h6.net/ss1.jpg)
