# Critique my game intro

**URL:** https://forum.kirupa.com/t/critique-my-game-intro/81714
**Category:** design
**Created:** [March 4, 2005, 10:47am UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/critique-my-game-intro/81714 "2005-03-04T10:47:34Z")
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### Author: ![innoxist](https://avatars.discourse-cdn.com/v4/letter/i/a88e4f/32.png) [@innoxist](https://forum.kirupa.com/u/innoxist)
#### Post date: [March 4, 2005, 10:47am UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/critique-my-game-intro/81714/1 "2005-03-04T10:47:34Z")

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This is my first attempt at any intro, and it’s for a game that me and my friends are making for a competition. Please give me any honest critique. Thank you!

[\>\> Intro here \<\<](http://www.geocities.com/innoxism/intro.html)