# Critique my new splash

**URL:** <https://forum.kirupa.com/t/critique-my-new-splash/149393>\
**Category:** design\
**Created:** [May 28, 2005, 5:29pm UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/critique-my-new-splash/149393 "2005-05-28T17:29:22Z")\
**Posts on this page:** 1\
**Page:** 1

<div class="post-metadata">

**Author:** ![pizzaguy234](https://avatars.discourse-cdn.com/v4/letter/p/a587f6/32.png) [@pizzaguy234](https://forum.kirupa.com/u/pizzaguy234)\
**Post date:** [May 28, 2005, 5:29pm UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/critique-my-new-splash/149393/1 "2005-05-28T17:29:22Z")

</div>

hey guys,

If you could offer me some feedback on this simple flash splash page for my soon to be online portfolio. It started of as a muck around piece in photoshop but i liked it so much, i finished it up in flash.

[http://www.criticalwebdesign.co.uk](http://www.criticalwebdesign.co.uk)

Thanks in advance. Andy