# Critique my site

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**Created:** [May 15, 2005, 2:35am UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/critique-my-site/147899 "2005-05-15T02:35:47Z")\
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**Author:** ![Dimz](https://avatars.discourse-cdn.com/v4/letter/d/838e76/32.png) [@Dimz](https://forum.kirupa.com/u/Dimz)\
**Post date:** [May 15, 2005, 2:35am UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/critique-my-site/147899/1 "2005-05-15T02:35:47Z")

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hi , im pretty new to flash , and theres nothing especially great about my site except maybe the nice art thats has been hand painted by myself and a friend of mine …

this is a mod site , and contains no violence or any other censorable content ; except the design document page (“design”) contains references to weaponry .

so with that out of the way , the site is here :  
[http://www.dimmt.biz/ransomfocus.html](http://www.dimmt.biz/ransomfocus.html)

please feel free to give suggestions or talk about things that are wrong about the page ( the music may not suit all fans either ) .

thanks , Dimz