# Critique my site

**URL:** <https://forum.kirupa.com/t/critique-my-site/147900>\
**Category:** Uncategorized\
**Created:** [May 15, 2005, 2:36am UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/critique-my-site/147900 "2005-05-15T02:36:00Z")\
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**Author:** ![Dimz](https://avatars.discourse-cdn.com/v4/letter/d/838e76/32.png) [@Dimz](https://forum.kirupa.com/u/Dimz)\
**Post date:** [May 15, 2005, 2:36am UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/critique-my-site/147900/1 "2005-05-15T02:36:00Z")

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hi , im pretty new to flash , and theres nothing especially great about my site except maybe the nice art thats has been hand painted by myself and a friend of mine …

this is a mod site , and contains no violence or any other censorable content ; except the design document page (“design”) contains references to weaponry .

so with that out of the way , the site is here :  
[http://www.dimmy.biz/ransomfocus.html](http://www.dimmy.biz/ransomfocus.html)

please feel free to give suggestions or talk about things that are wrong about the page ( the music may not suit all fans either ) .

thanks , Dimz

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**Author:** ![salvador\_marley](https://avatars.discourse-cdn.com/v4/letter/s/b5ac83/32.png) [@salvador\_marley](https://forum.kirupa.com/u/salvador_marley)\
**Post date:** [May 21, 2005, 9:01pm UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/critique-my-site/147900/2 "2005-05-21T21:01:00Z")

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both myself and reefster have now offered tutes to help this guy out and i feel confident that things will improve greatly from this moment forward. Ok guys, lets all take a backstep and let the dude remake the site which i feel he will greatly enjoy doing.

Flash is always a constant learning curve and can be at many times very frustrating especially when it comes to using scripts like php etc

when the new design is made - please post it on this thread because if you don’t i might not see it 🙂

good luck new flasher 🙂