# Critique needed

**URL:** <https://forum.kirupa.com/t/critique-needed/69779>\
**Category:** design\
**Created:** [November 8, 2004, 2:15am UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/critique-needed/69779 "2004-11-08T02:15:30Z")\
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**Author:** ![kikon](https://avatars.discourse-cdn.com/v4/letter/k/f05b48/32.png) [@kikon](https://forum.kirupa.com/u/kikon)\
**Post date:** [November 8, 2004, 2:15am UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/critique-needed/69779/1 "2004-11-08T02:15:30Z")

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Ok, there are two things I have for you to look at. First, my cd cover design:

[http://69.72.226.10/~wzstudio/~site~/songs/cd%20sticker2%20copyb.jpg](http://69.72.226.10/~wzstudio/~site~/songs/cd%20sticker2%20copyb.jpg)

And second, my latest track:

[http://69.72.226.10/~wzstudio/~site~/songs/new4.mp3](http://69.72.226.10/~wzstudio/~site~/songs/new4.mp3)

I would like to know whether you found them catchy, and if you have any tips for me please do share. I worked on this song for quite a long time, enjoy.