# Critique on rough **URL:** \ **Category:** Uncategorized\ **Created:** [March 25, 2006, 11:43am UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/critique-on-rough/183277 "2006-03-25T11:43:03Z")\ **Posts on this page:** 10\ **Page:** 1
**Author:** ![SelectionTool](https://avatars.discourse-cdn.com/v4/letter/s/ac8455/32.png) [@SelectionTool](https://forum.kirupa.com/u/SelectionTool)\ **Post date:** [March 25, 2006, 11:43am UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/critique-on-rough/183277/1 "2006-03-25T11:43:03Z")
Righ, as some of you might know I did an illustration a couple of days ago , but being a novice I did not get too many positive responses.Just to remind you here is the work I did first ![](http://www.freewebs.com/golfstix/love12.jpg) NOW HERE IS A MORE RECENT PIECE.HOPEFULY MY TECHNIQUE HAS IMPROVED.ANYWAY ITS JUST A ROUGH AT THE MOMENT.LOOKING FORWARD TO YOUR RESPONSES ![](http://www.freewebs.com/golfstix/hara.jpg) ---
**Author:** ![Absent](https://avatars.discourse-cdn.com/v4/letter/a/45deac/32.png) [@Absent](https://forum.kirupa.com/u/Absent)\ **Post date:** [March 25, 2006, 12:08pm UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/critique-on-rough/183277/2 "2006-03-25T12:08:29Z")
Your recent work was a vast improvement from the first but you might want to clean it up a little. The eyes need more work done on them maybe define thier boundaries a little more. The technique is sound and you got the shading right. ---
**Author:** ![SessionDesign](https://yyz1.discourse-cdn.com/flex011/user_avatar/forum.kirupa.com/sessiondesign/32/1887_2.png) [@SessionDesign](https://forum.kirupa.com/u/SessionDesign)\ **Post date:** [March 25, 2006, 6:33pm UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/critique-on-rough/183277/3 "2006-03-25T18:33:46Z")
Not bad at all! But the eyes need some more work… Keep up the good work! :thumb: ---
**Author:** ![SelectionTool](https://avatars.discourse-cdn.com/v4/letter/s/ac8455/32.png) [@SelectionTool](https://forum.kirupa.com/u/SelectionTool)\ **Post date:** [March 25, 2006, 6:55pm UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/critique-on-rough/183277/4 "2006-03-25T18:55:59Z")
need to know any places I can find good brush tutorials , thats one of the areas I really need to work on ---
**Author:** ![SPAD3S](https://avatars.discourse-cdn.com/v4/letter/s/a88e4f/32.png) [@SPAD3S](https://forum.kirupa.com/u/SPAD3S)\ **Post date:** [March 25, 2006, 7:33pm UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/critique-on-rough/183277/5 "2006-03-25T19:33:36Z")
nice…Looking good ---
**Author:** ![SelectionTool](https://avatars.discourse-cdn.com/v4/letter/s/ac8455/32.png) [@SelectionTool](https://forum.kirupa.com/u/SelectionTool)\ **Post date:** [March 25, 2006, 7:49pm UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/critique-on-rough/183277/6 "2006-03-25T19:49:54Z")
thanks , been really working on improving my technique.Still got some way to go though ---
**Author:** ![SelectionTool](https://avatars.discourse-cdn.com/v4/letter/s/ac8455/32.png) [@SelectionTool](https://forum.kirupa.com/u/SelectionTool)\ **Post date:** [March 28, 2006, 7:16am UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/critique-on-rough/183277/7 "2006-03-28T07:16:10Z")
another rough I did ![](http://www.freewebs.com/golfstix/gs.jpg) ---
**Author:** ![kmria](https://yyz1.discourse-cdn.com/flex011/user_avatar/forum.kirupa.com/kmria/32/2248_2.png) [@kmria](https://forum.kirupa.com/u/kmria)\ **Post date:** [March 28, 2006, 10:13pm UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/critique-on-rough/183277/8 "2006-03-28T22:13:03Z")
wow, this is really good. I got mate who can do this sort of illustrator work. I always wanted to learn this… CAN YOU PLEASE GUIDE ME TO SOME TUTORIALS? please…? ? (-: ---
**Author:** ![SelectionTool](https://avatars.discourse-cdn.com/v4/letter/s/ac8455/32.png) [@SelectionTool](https://forum.kirupa.com/u/SelectionTool)\ **Post date:** [March 29, 2006, 12:13am UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/critique-on-rough/183277/9 "2006-03-29T00:13:42Z")
best place to start is [http://www.ndesign-studio.com/](http://www.ndesign-studio.com/).Got a few good tutorials there. Another good joint is [http://www.tutorialoutpost.com/](http://www.tutorialoutpost.com/).You can get further links to other tutorials from these two site ---
**Author:** ![kmria](https://yyz1.discourse-cdn.com/flex011/user_avatar/forum.kirupa.com/kmria/32/2248_2.png) [@kmria](https://forum.kirupa.com/u/kmria)\ **Post date:** [March 30, 2006, 9:51am UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/critique-on-rough/183277/10 "2006-03-30T09:51:22Z")
Thanks for that, I am gonna give it a go. 😃