# Critique PLEASE

**URL:** <https://forum.kirupa.com/t/critique-please/200469>\
**Category:** design\
**Created:** [September 12, 2006, 3:01pm UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/critique-please/200469 "2006-09-12T15:01:33Z")\
**Posts on this page:** 1\
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**Author:** ![Qwestt](https://avatars.discourse-cdn.com/v4/letter/q/ed655f/32.png) [@Qwestt](https://forum.kirupa.com/u/Qwestt)\
**Post date:** [September 12, 2006, 3:01pm UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/critique-please/200469/1 "2006-09-12T15:01:33Z")

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Hey, so this is my frist time posting work that i have done. I built this game for a client who ended up using it for mtvU I am happy with it but it definitly could be better. I would love to hear your thoughts! So for next time i have use your suggestions to improve my work.

thanks

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