# Critique plz **URL:** \ **Category:** Uncategorized\ **Created:** [September 23, 2004, 2:23pm UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/critique-plz/65158 "2004-09-23T14:23:10Z")\ **Posts on this page:** 8\ **Page:** 1
**Author:** ![mathagat](https://avatars.discourse-cdn.com/v4/letter/m/49beb7/32.png) [@mathagat](https://forum.kirupa.com/u/mathagat)\ **Post date:** [September 23, 2004, 2:23pm UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/critique-plz/65158/1 "2004-09-23T14:23:10Z")
this is my personal photography page. i’m a graphic design student trying to play w/ different techniques throughout my learning process. critique on design is welcome. thanks! ---
**Author:** ![system](https://canada1.discourse-cdn.com/flex011/uploads/kirupa/original/3X/6/2/621e5c11736f46532526e61be85940af4230f3e5.png) [@system](https://forum.kirupa.com/u/system)\ **Post date:** [September 23, 2004, 3:00pm UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/critique-plz/65158/2 "2004-09-23T15:00:43Z")
You forgot the link my friend. ---
**Author:** ![system](https://canada1.discourse-cdn.com/flex011/uploads/kirupa/original/3X/6/2/621e5c11736f46532526e61be85940af4230f3e5.png) [@system](https://forum.kirupa.com/u/system)\ **Post date:** [September 23, 2004, 3:01pm UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/critique-plz/65158/3 "2004-09-23T15:01:43Z")
thank you wanyo. how lame am i? [http://matt.hopkins.net/photography/](http://matt.hopkins.net/photography/) ---
**Author:** ![system](https://canada1.discourse-cdn.com/flex011/uploads/kirupa/original/3X/6/2/621e5c11736f46532526e61be85940af4230f3e5.png) [@system](https://forum.kirupa.com/u/system)\ **Post date:** [September 23, 2004, 3:57pm UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/critique-plz/65158/4 "2004-09-23T15:57:16Z")
I think the design is nice and simple and it works well. I like the layout a lot! The header is nice and I like the way you used your photography in it. I’m not a big fan of the fonts you used, they follow that rustic look but don’t flow well with the design. Perhaps try somethign a little sleeker looking. Everything else looks fine! Good job! ---
**Author:** ![system](https://canada1.discourse-cdn.com/flex011/uploads/kirupa/original/3X/6/2/621e5c11736f46532526e61be85940af4230f3e5.png) [@system](https://forum.kirupa.com/u/system)\ **Post date:** [September 23, 2004, 4:07pm UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/critique-plz/65158/5 "2004-09-23T16:07:22Z")
thx! i appreciate your feedback. by the way, are you talking about the title “RESULTS” or the body type? when you say “sleeker looking” do you mean like a san-serif face? ---
**Author:** ![system](https://canada1.discourse-cdn.com/flex011/uploads/kirupa/original/3X/6/2/621e5c11736f46532526e61be85940af4230f3e5.png) [@system](https://forum.kirupa.com/u/system)\ **Post date:** [September 23, 2004, 4:20pm UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/critique-plz/65158/6 "2004-09-23T16:20:59Z")
Hey your a happy looking guy 🙂 Design is nice but I really don’t like the popup. Why not try to implement a Flash gallery? ---
**Author:** ![system](https://canada1.discourse-cdn.com/flex011/uploads/kirupa/original/3X/6/2/621e5c11736f46532526e61be85940af4230f3e5.png) [@system](https://forum.kirupa.com/u/system)\ **Post date:** [September 23, 2004, 4:22pm UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/critique-plz/65158/7 "2004-09-23T16:22:01Z")
The body type is fine, but the other fonts just don’t seem to work. I’d say try a sans-serif, but there is a few smooth looking serif fonts. Play with it a bit and find what works the best. ---
**Author:** ![system](https://canada1.discourse-cdn.com/flex011/uploads/kirupa/original/3X/6/2/621e5c11736f46532526e61be85940af4230f3e5.png) [@system](https://forum.kirupa.com/u/system)\ **Post date:** [September 23, 2004, 4:59pm UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/critique-plz/65158/8 "2004-09-23T16:59:51Z")
thx digitalosophy. and yes, i am a happy guy. i would like to build a flash/xml gallery. sure would be easier to update. I’m gonna work on [http://kirupa.com/developer/mx2004/xml\_flash\_photogallery.htm](http://kirupa.com/developer/mx2004/xml_flash_photogallery.htm) – and see where we go from there.