# Critique Requested!

**URL:** https://forum.kirupa.com/t/critique-requested/219780
**Category:** design
**Created:** [March 20, 2007, 4:00am UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/critique-requested/219780 "2007-03-20T04:00:10Z")
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### Author: ![Zetaspark](https://avatars.discourse-cdn.com/v4/letter/z/aca169/32.png) [@Zetaspark](https://forum.kirupa.com/u/Zetaspark)
#### Post date: [March 20, 2007, 4:00am UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/critique-requested/219780/1 "2007-03-20T04:00:10Z")

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Heya! Long time listener, first time caller 🙂

I’ve been fiddling around with Flash for a few weeks now, and have mostly been learning to get the hang of all the tools.  
(I find it much better than MSPaint.)

Anyway, I decided to try my hand at web design, and I came up with this result. I think it’s pretty good, but I won’t truly know until I get a full critique.

[http://www.freewebs.com/zetaspark/personal.html](http://www.freewebs.com/zetaspark/personal.html)

Harsh criticism and nit-picking is appreciated 😉 Thanks in advance.