# Critique this please **URL:** \ **Category:** Uncategorized\ **Created:** [September 29, 2004, 9:01pm UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/critique-this-please/124083 "2004-09-29T21:01:14Z")\ **Posts on this page:** 1\ **Page:** 1
**Author:** ![protagonist](https://avatars.discourse-cdn.com/v4/letter/p/8e7dd6/32.png) [@protagonist](https://forum.kirupa.com/u/protagonist)\ **Post date:** [September 29, 2004, 9:01pm UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/critique-this-please/124083/1 "2004-09-29T21:01:14Z")
hiya, this is my latest project: a site for a church. basically its a kind of christian church that seperated from the roman-catholics in 451, with a community in austria. currently i’m trying to get a layout done for the main page. anyways, what you’ll see after clicking the link below is all i could come up with so far and honestly, i’m not too confident with it… :-/ the customer asked me to add links to his old page, plz just ignore them, as well as the german text… so, if you can drop a few lines about what you think of the layout/look of the first page, i’d appreciate it, and please… be honest 🙂 thanks in advance, oh, and please mind that i’m no pro at all, just doing this to finance my studies… [color=#333333][http://www.suryoye.at/](http://www.suryoye.at/)[/color]