# Critique too

**URL:** https://forum.kirupa.com/t/critique-too/158979
**Category:** Uncategorized
**Created:** [August 13, 2005, 11:10am UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/critique-too/158979 "2005-08-13T11:10:40Z")
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### Author: ![this](https://yyz1.discourse-cdn.com/flex011/user_avatar/forum.kirupa.com/this/32/669_2.png) [@this](https://forum.kirupa.com/u/this)
#### Post date: [August 13, 2005, 11:10am UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/critique-too/158979/1 "2005-08-13T11:10:40Z")

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[[color=sienna] **www.pablodavi.com/v1/main\_.html** [/color]](http://www.pablodavi.com/v1/main_.html)  
• my site not finaly yet. but i want critique for modifique before put online.  
😃  
CRITIQUE.

[color=darkred]Tks in advance[/color]