# Critique

**URL:** <https://forum.kirupa.com/t/critique/22752>\
**Category:** design\
**Created:** [June 8, 2003, 3:18am UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/critique/22752 "2003-06-08T03:18:08Z")\
**Posts on this page:** 10\
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**Author:** ![xmattx](https://avatars.discourse-cdn.com/v4/letter/x/6de8d8/32.png) [@xmattx](https://forum.kirupa.com/u/xmattx)\
**Post date:** [June 8, 2003, 3:18am UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/critique/22752/1 "2003-06-08T03:18:08Z")

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its always good to get feedback:

fire away.

thanks

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**Author:** ![system](https://canada1.discourse-cdn.com/flex011/uploads/kirupa/original/3X/6/2/621e5c11736f46532526e61be85940af4230f3e5.png) [@system](https://forum.kirupa.com/u/system)\
**Post date:** [June 8, 2003, 3:34am UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/critique/22752/2 "2003-06-08T03:34:47Z")

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Thats really cool :thumb: Love the style, I especially like the bit with the outlines. Very nice :beam:

- Soul :s:

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**Author:** ![system](https://canada1.discourse-cdn.com/flex011/uploads/kirupa/original/3X/6/2/621e5c11736f46532526e61be85940af4230f3e5.png) [@system](https://forum.kirupa.com/u/system)\
**Post date:** [June 8, 2003, 5:41am UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/critique/22752/3 "2003-06-08T05:41:31Z")

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strange… but good

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**Author:** ![system](https://canada1.discourse-cdn.com/flex011/uploads/kirupa/original/3X/6/2/621e5c11736f46532526e61be85940af4230f3e5.png) [@system](https://forum.kirupa.com/u/system)\
**Post date:** [June 8, 2003, 7:03am UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/critique/22752/4 "2003-06-08T07:03:51Z")

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Bit weird indeed, but very good work m8 :beam:

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**Author:** ![system](https://canada1.discourse-cdn.com/flex011/uploads/kirupa/original/3X/6/2/621e5c11736f46532526e61be85940af4230f3e5.png) [@system](https://forum.kirupa.com/u/system)\
**Post date:** [June 8, 2003, 2:54pm UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/critique/22752/5 "2003-06-08T14:54:31Z")

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i too like the style. but something about something in there doesnt really appeal to me, if i can put my finger on it i will tell you.

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**Author:** ![system](https://canada1.discourse-cdn.com/flex011/uploads/kirupa/original/3X/6/2/621e5c11736f46532526e61be85940af4230f3e5.png) [@system](https://forum.kirupa.com/u/system)\
**Post date:** [June 8, 2003, 3:08pm UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/critique/22752/6 "2003-06-08T15:08:48Z")

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ya…

“something about something” doesnt help to much 🙂

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**Author:** ![system](https://canada1.discourse-cdn.com/flex011/uploads/kirupa/original/3X/6/2/621e5c11736f46532526e61be85940af4230f3e5.png) [@system](https://forum.kirupa.com/u/system)\
**Post date:** [June 8, 2003, 3:42pm UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/critique/22752/7 "2003-06-08T15:42:05Z")

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it is good but I am not feeling the font. Maybe a more stylized or san serif font. JMO

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**Author:** ![system](https://canada1.discourse-cdn.com/flex011/uploads/kirupa/original/3X/6/2/621e5c11736f46532526e61be85940af4230f3e5.png) [@system](https://forum.kirupa.com/u/system)\
**Post date:** [June 8, 2003, 3:50pm UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/critique/22752/8 "2003-06-08T15:50:41Z")

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ya I got the same comment from someone else…

hmmm… See my thinking was a semi serrifed font, looked traditional enought to be easy on the eye for print material, but modern enough to reflect the genre of music… also remember this is print material and would be much sharper off the screen.

anything more detailed about the type, what doesnt work ect?

thanks.

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**Author:** ![system](https://canada1.discourse-cdn.com/flex011/uploads/kirupa/original/3X/6/2/621e5c11736f46532526e61be85940af4230f3e5.png) [@system](https://forum.kirupa.com/u/system)\
**Post date:** [June 8, 2003, 4:11pm UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/critique/22752/9 "2003-06-08T16:11:41Z")

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i think the large text has not quite enough contrast, but it could be my monitor, and of course it will be very different in print

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**Author:** ![system](https://canada1.discourse-cdn.com/flex011/uploads/kirupa/original/3X/6/2/621e5c11736f46532526e61be85940af4230f3e5.png) [@system](https://forum.kirupa.com/u/system)\
**Post date:** [June 8, 2003, 4:22pm UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/critique/22752/10 "2003-06-08T16:22:01Z")

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I think the angles are too sharp…since the nature of the graphic is kinda curvy and bubbly…even like a verdana would look good in this position. or something more curve of a type set where the stroke is even all around the font. JMO