# Critiques, Advice, Help much appeciated

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**Created:** [April 30, 2005, 4:37am UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/critiques-advice-help-much-appeciated/146339 "2005-04-30T04:37:16Z")
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### Author: ![kylepero](https://avatars.discourse-cdn.com/v4/letter/k/df788c/32.png) [@kylepero](https://forum.kirupa.com/u/kylepero)
#### Post date: [April 30, 2005, 4:37am UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/critiques-advice-help-much-appeciated/146339/1 "2005-04-30T04:37:16Z")

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Hello all, this is the redesign of my portfolio. Actually it is the second site that i have ever built in flash. its not finished, so keep that in mind with your critiques.

I am teaching myself flash, and it is a hard thing to do as im sure alot of you know. this might be a lot to ask but if anyone is willing to give any advice on the structure of the site that would be awesome. i could email the source files to someone that wants to help. i ask this becuase it seemed like i did more work than necessary on this site. (there has to be an easier way!)

THanks a lot in advance

here is the link

> **[Cashing In On The Web: Why You Should Launch Your E-commerce Business This Year](http://lumediadesign.com)**
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> Traditionally, buying or renting a high-street store was the only way to set up a respectable retail business. However, it had so many limitations such as the expense of setting up to the physical restriction of the store. Thanks to Read More ...

-kyle