# Critiques please :)

**URL:** https://forum.kirupa.com/t/critiques-please/172760
**Category:** design
**Created:** [December 17, 2005, 4:56pm UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/critiques-please/172760 "2005-12-17T16:56:07Z")
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### Author: ![GotGoose](https://avatars.discourse-cdn.com/v4/letter/g/3d9bf3/32.png) [@GotGoose](https://forum.kirupa.com/u/GotGoose)
#### Post date: [December 17, 2005, 4:56pm UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/critiques-please/172760/1 "2005-12-17T16:56:07Z")

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Here’s the url: [http://www.thegoosmans.com/outsiders2/](http://www.thegoosmans.com/outsiders2/)

What do you think of the design? What could be improved?

Thanks! 😃