# Critiques **URL:** \ **Category:** Uncategorized\ **Created:** [January 12, 2003, 6:32pm UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/critiques/11125 "2003-01-12T18:32:58Z")\ **Posts on this page:** 9\ **Page:** 1
**Author:** ![coreymose](https://avatars.discourse-cdn.com/v4/letter/c/ea5d25/32.png) [@coreymose](https://forum.kirupa.com/u/coreymose)\ **Post date:** [January 12, 2003, 6:32pm UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/critiques/11125/1 "2003-01-12T18:32:58Z")
any comments on my site… [http://coreymose.net](http://coreymose.net) ---
**Author:** ![system](https://canada1.discourse-cdn.com/flex011/uploads/kirupa/original/3X/6/2/621e5c11736f46532526e61be85940af4230f3e5.png) [@system](https://forum.kirupa.com/u/system)\ **Post date:** [January 12, 2003, 7:53pm UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/critiques/11125/2 "2003-01-12T19:53:44Z")
wow that is a very cool navigation setup you have there and the overall layout is pretty clean. The only suggestions I can offer is that maybe adding more color to the layout and instead of having a button that closes the menu completely, have it just slide back to the open menu state. Also some samples of your work would be nice as well, I didn’t see anything in your portfolio section. Nice work overall, I look forward to seeing more of it. =) ---
**Author:** ![system](https://canada1.discourse-cdn.com/flex011/uploads/kirupa/original/3X/6/2/621e5c11736f46532526e61be85940af4230f3e5.png) [@system](https://forum.kirupa.com/u/system)\ **Post date:** [January 13, 2003, 3:08pm UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/critiques/11125/3 "2003-01-13T15:08:56Z")
clean, simple and nice 🙂 ---
**Author:** ![system](https://canada1.discourse-cdn.com/flex011/uploads/kirupa/original/3X/6/2/621e5c11736f46532526e61be85940af4230f3e5.png) [@system](https://forum.kirupa.com/u/system)\ **Post date:** [January 13, 2003, 4:45pm UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/critiques/11125/4 "2003-01-13T16:45:36Z")
I have to confess that it took me a couple of seconds when it first loaded to work out what was going on. I thought the green bar was a preloader or something. Duh… It’s been a long day. It’s a very nice idea though, with the box moving over each icon. It’s a bit overly green though, some more colour would be pleasing to the eye. It also looked very small on my screen. I’m running at 1152 x 864 resoulution and there was a lot of empty space. ---
**Author:** ![system](https://canada1.discourse-cdn.com/flex011/uploads/kirupa/original/3X/6/2/621e5c11736f46532526e61be85940af4230f3e5.png) [@system](https://forum.kirupa.com/u/system)\ **Post date:** [January 18, 2003, 1:00am UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/critiques/11125/5 "2003-01-18T01:00:18Z")
Nice site Mose. Keep it up. Sniggins ---
**Author:** ![system](https://canada1.discourse-cdn.com/flex011/uploads/kirupa/original/3X/6/2/621e5c11736f46532526e61be85940af4230f3e5.png) [@system](https://forum.kirupa.com/u/system)\ **Post date:** [January 18, 2003, 1:22am UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/critiques/11125/6 "2003-01-18T01:22:14Z")
It seems a bit blank. Try adding a little more to it, instead of having it a bit too minamalistic. ---
**Author:** ![system](https://canada1.discourse-cdn.com/flex011/uploads/kirupa/original/3X/6/2/621e5c11736f46532526e61be85940af4230f3e5.png) [@system](https://forum.kirupa.com/u/system)\ **Post date:** [January 18, 2003, 1:39am UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/critiques/11125/7 "2003-01-18T01:39:10Z")
Thanks for your comment, minimalism is what i was aiming for. ---
**Author:** ![system](https://canada1.discourse-cdn.com/flex011/uploads/kirupa/original/3X/6/2/621e5c11736f46532526e61be85940af4230f3e5.png) [@system](https://forum.kirupa.com/u/system)\ **Post date:** [January 18, 2003, 2:51am UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/critiques/11125/8 "2003-01-18T02:51:31Z")
Nice,just a little more different color is need on the green bar.Or maybe a little thinner. jt ---
**Author:** ![system](https://canada1.discourse-cdn.com/flex011/uploads/kirupa/original/3X/6/2/621e5c11736f46532526e61be85940af4230f3e5.png) [@system](https://forum.kirupa.com/u/system)\ **Post date:** [January 19, 2003, 9:43pm UTC](https://forum.kirupa.com/t/critiques/11125/9 "2003-01-19T21:43:08Z")
in my opinon i think that the 3D bars should be thiner if u do that and maybe add some more background or space animation it’ll look great!!